Haley
- English
- Obviously, I needn’t to take his class now.
- Obviously, I didn't need to show up anymore.
Sedgehead
- English
- We came to eat at the company’s canteen together.
- We came to eat at the company’s cafeteria together.
- Canteen is used to talk about the place to eat in the US military, but few other people us the name that way, except the Chinese, for 餐厅 which is where the military came up with it.
raqy
- English
- Not only people were persecuted, but also cultural relics and antiques were destroyed.
- Not only were people persecuted, but also cultural relics and antiques were destroyed.
Mine Fielder
- English
- Xiao Ming was a seven years old boy.
- Xiao Ming was a seven year old boy.
- a -> single year no a -> multiple years
Lee
- English
- Everyone has a variety of personalities.
- Everyone has a variety of multiple facets to their personalityies.Everyone has multiple sides to their personality.The same person is often called upon to play multiple roles in their daily lives.
- There's nothing wrong with what you wrote, but it means something other than what I think you intended. When you say someone has a "variety of personalities" it sounds like that person is insane; like they have schizophrenia or some other mental illness! You have one personality, but different sides/aspects/facets to that personality. You are a woman, a student, a daughter, a friend, a .... A famous quote from Shakespeare is: "All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players: They have their exits and their entrances; And one man in his time plays many parts."
Lee
- English
- So I tell myself not to label people when you know little about them.
- So I tell myself not to label other people when you know so little about them. Or: "...when you hardly know anything about them."
Lee
- English
- Some people give me a very good impression at first sight, which makes me want to know more about them, but I feel disappointed because it turned out to be that they are completely not the person I think they are.
- Some people give me a very good impression at first sight, which makes me want to know more about them, but I feel disappointed because it turned out to be that they are completely not the person I think they are.
- You wrote: "Some people give me a very good impression at first sight, which makes me want to know more about them...". This is actually fine grammatically, but you wouldn't actually hear someone say this. Instead, "Some people give off a very good impression at first sight, which makes me want to know more about them...". Or you could say "Some people make a very good impression upon me at first sight, which makes me want to get to know them better..."
doozyj
- English
- And people’s characters can be changed easily with the external environment’s change.
- And people’s characters can easily be changed easily with the depending on their surrounding external environment. s’s change.
- There are many ways to say this. I'm sure other native speakers will chime in.
Ges
- English
- City loses its hustle and bustle when the night is coming.
- The city loses its hustle and bustle when night falls.
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