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Hello everyone, my name is Sean, and the chinese name is SongJiangwei. I am born in the Beijing, and now, I attend in the Renmin University of China. I am sophomore.
I will take part in the IELTS in the last mouth, but I feel my English is very bad. In fact, I have on confidence.
My parents hope I became the elite on my professional, by the way, my professional is International Finance Service. My parents think I must get in 7 about IELTS score, but in order to me, I think the 5 score is my fist aim.
One years ago, I will go to USA, and completed my studies. The IELTS score decide I choose what level school. My school provide some USA university, but only two school is satisfactory, Penn State University and Northeastern University. And this two school need 6.5 about IELTS.
So I need you help. I know I has long road to walk in IELTS. I will hard work and keep the good attitude.
My Skype number is sjw0411, I willing to chat on the Skype and there.
If you have the problem in the chinese, I will try my best to help you.
Hope you have the good day.
I will take part in the IELTS in the last mouth, but I feel my English is very bad. In fact, I have on confidence.
My parents hope I became the elite on my professional, by the way, my professional is International Finance Service. My parents think I must get in 7 about IELTS score, but in order to me, I think the 5 score is my fist aim.
One years ago, I will go to USA, and completed my studies. The IELTS score decide I choose what level school. My school provide some USA university, but only two school is satisfactory, Penn State University and Northeastern University. And this two school need 6.5 about IELTS.
So I need you help. I know I has long road to walk in IELTS. I will hard work and keep the good attitude.
My Skype number is sjw0411, I willing to chat on the Skype and there.
If you have the problem in the chinese, I will try my best to help you.
Hope you have the good day.
I'm happy to meet you Sean(SongJiangwei).
Have a nice day and hope your everything goes well too!
MiMi :)))
Me too. You are real friend. hehe
Thank you reply me. You are fist reply in mine Lang-8.
In my country, has a old sentence: the good people can get the best reward.
Hope you have a good day!
I was am born in the Beijing, and now, I have attended in the Renmin University of China.
I am a sophomore.
I will take took part in the IELTS in the last mouth, but I feel think my English is very bad.
have you taken your IELTS exam yet? because you used future tense "will" and last mouth here.
My parents hope that I will become became an the elite in on my professional, by the way, my professional is International Finance Service.
My parents think that I should must get about 7 score in IELTS , but in order to for me, I think the 5 score is my aim fist aim.
One years ago, I will go went to USA and completed my studies.
The IELTS score decide I choose what level school.
My IELTS score will determine the level of school i should choose.
My school provide some USA university, but only two school is satisfactory, Penn State University and Northeastern University.
My university provided some information of USA university, but there were only two school i think is satisfactory which are Penn State University and Northeastern University.
And this two school need 6.5 about IELTS.
And both require 6.5 in IELTS
So I need you your help.
I know I has long road to walk in IELTS.
I know i have a long way to go in studying IELTS.
I will hard work and keep the a good attitude.
然後還有Tense.
keep going!! 你可以做到的!
Thank you for your very serious to help me to amend my article.
your are right. "a, an, the" i really don't know how to used it.
I will practice on this point.
And thanks again.