commented on IELTS writing task 9
showed that the characteristics are more important for us personality and development than our life experiences. 我不知道是什么意思 >.<
made 18 corrections for IELTS writing task 8
一般英文文章是有
开头-introduction:state what you are going to say - state your points
主体段 - body: explain/discuss/justify your points
结论 -concl...
made 29 corrections for IELTS writing task 6
Very well written, but your opinionated portion of the essay seems rushed and not too detailed. Try to write more on your own opinion and...
made 21 corrections for IELTS writing task 7
Alright. I hope you don't find my corrections too harsh. I don't mean to be very harsh, so I'm sorry. I hope you can perform ...
made 24 corrections for IELTS writing task 5
Nice job on the essay! I tried to follow the three points that you wanted editors to follow, so I hope that my corrections are satisfacto...
made 21 corrections for IELTS writing task 3
Common punctuation mistake with "，" if you going to use a comma after the first phrase dont leave a space after the phrase for ...
made 21 corrections for IELTS writing task 4
Nice topic! I tried to make it sound more formal, but I focused more on fixing grammar, nouns, and modifiers. Sometimes, the essay is too...
made 6 corrections for grateful
A wonderful diary entry. Don't worry...you are not wasting any of our time. We are all on this website to better improve. We'll a...
made 4 corrections for a little blue
On lines two and three your tenses are a bit confusing to whether you are referring to the past, future, or present tense but I tried my ...
showed that the characteristics are more important for us personality and development than our life experiences. 我不知道是什么意思 >.<
一般英文文章是有 开头-introduction:state what you are going to say - state your points 主体段 - body: explain/discuss/justify your points 结论 -concl...
Very well written, but your opinionated portion of the essay seems rushed and not too detailed. Try to write more on your own opinion and...
Alright. I hope you don't find my corrections too harsh. I don't mean to be very harsh, so I'm sorry. I hope you can perform ...
Nice job on the essay! I tried to follow the three points that you wanted editors to follow, so I hope that my corrections are satisfacto...
Common punctuation mistake with "，" if you going to use a comma after the first phrase dont leave a space after the phrase for ...
Nice topic! I tried to make it sound more formal, but I focused more on fixing grammar, nouns, and modifiers. Sometimes, the essay is too...
( ) 括号内的字那个都行 / 用了这个隔开括号内的选项 Zzzz...可能有些写错了．．改的什么我这边是三点早上了 啊哈哈哈！
A wonderful diary entry. Don't worry...you are not wasting any of our time. We are all on this website to better improve. We'll a...
On lines two and three your tenses are a bit confusing to whether you are referring to the past, future, or present tense but I tried my ...
Great effort!