my personality
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My name is Soo. Don’t you think my name radiates self-confidence and optimism? I am a confidence and positive person. When I was high school student, I was a member of dance club. My position was center, although I was lousy at dancing, I had confidence. And I did not hurt when somebody tell me about my lack of dancing skill. Rather I thought they were concern about me. Now, I think my mistake and lack of skills make me more successful women.
But my father always complain about my personality. He is quiet and serious if he show himself to other people. Also, he is timid when someone talk to him. He is always worried about other people thinking. And he want to be a perfect man. For example, he used to spend searching the road at least 3hours. He hate person who does a slapdash job.
Last year, we fighted before we go on summer vacation. Because he thought many places where he had wanted to go, contrary, I thought only one place. I was fighten by him around trip. Because I wanted to do it much more while he wanted to adhere to planning schedules. However, my mother told me that our trip was more comfortable because of timid and more funny because of optimism. At that moment, I thought we advanced due to difference.
But my father always complain about my personality. He is quiet and serious if he show himself to other people. Also, he is timid when someone talk to him. He is always worried about other people thinking. And he want to be a perfect man. For example, he used to spend searching the road at least 3hours. He hate person who does a slapdash job.
Last year, we fighted before we go on summer vacation. Because he thought many places where he had wanted to go, contrary, I thought only one place. I was fighten by him around trip. Because I wanted to do it much more while he wanted to adhere to planning schedules. However, my mother told me that our trip was more comfortable because of timid and more funny because of optimism. At that moment, I thought we advanced due to difference.
I am a confident and positive person.
When I was a high school student, I was a member of a/the dance club.
My position was center, although I was lousy at dancing, I had confidence.
"my position was center" sounds a bit odd to me, but I dont know much about dance clubs. Personally I would say something like:
I was the lead dancer //..one of the lead dancers
I had to dance at the center of our troupe/class
And I was not hurt/upset when/if somebody told me about my lack of dancing skill.
It might be better to avoid the word "hurt", as readers might think you're about to mention an accident while dancing.
Rather I thought they were concerned about/for me.
Now, I think my mistakes and lack of skills make/makes me more successful women.
I think "make" must be correct, but "makes" sounds more natural to me
But my father always complains about my personality.
Also/because he is timid when someone talks to him.// when people talk to him
He is always worried about what other people are thinking.
And he wants to be a perfect man.
For example, he used to spend searching the road at least 3hours.
Sorry, don't undestand. Maybe you mean:
He would spend 3 hours looking for an address, rather than ask someone
He hates people who do a slapdash job.//He hates anybody who does a slapdash job.
Last year, we fought before we went on (our) summer vacation.
Because he had thought of many places where he had wanted to go, whereas I, on the contrary, thought of only one place.
I was fighting with him the whole trip.
Because I wanted to do things spontaneously, while he wanted to adhere to his/our/the planning schedules.
However, my mother told me that our trip was more comfortable because of his timidity and more funny because of my optimism.
At that moment, I thought were making pogress, due to our differences.//[usually] ..despite our differences.
confident = adjective