I corrected it because it's too long ! my writing is about death penalty

Need for the Death Penalty





I agree that imposing the death penalty as a punishment for the worst crimes is a good thing.

In the world, many people commit sins.

Some people kill other person or some people rape women.

Usually, these terrible crimes are committed by people who are deprived of a good education.

Because their parents are bad, so they couldn't educate well their children and they make trouble.

In fact, the blame lies with the criminals and, by extension, with the hard social structure such as the law of the jungle.

However, despite such evidence, we should admit that the crime criminals committed can't be forgiven, especially in murder cases.

At least, now born of man, killing same humans is biggest crime among the crimes. No matter what happens, human must not kill the human.

In this case, murderers give up becoming human being, so we must not sympathize them any more.

Life is very important and nobody can not violate anyone else’s life. However, murderers kill people too easily.

This is not a simple problem.

They violate human dignity and they can't feel other person's pain.

Therefore, murderers deserve death and I believe that the death penalty is essential for three reasons.