Do you like cartoon?
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I was thinking about what I want to write until I saw a cartoon.I don't know whether you have read cartoon,but now I want to introduce a cartoon that I like.What is the important factor for you when you read a cartoon? A style of the cartoonist or the story?The name of this cartoon called skip beat.This is the only girl comic that I am read.The story is about a girl who hard struggle in the entertainment. Actually, I didn't like the style of this cartoon,especially the face.but when I saw the cartoon carefully,I change my mind.now I like it very much.I like the eyes of all characters.I think those different form other comic.I always focus on the eyes whose can exactly express the minds of the characters.maybe the few words can not express what I want to say.but if you have little interest in cartoon.I think you will not be disappointed.
I will write the Chinese again. if I couldn't express the exact meaning.Please tell me~ I am glad that you can correct my mistakes~~~
thank you very much~:)
我一直在考虑写些什么，直到我看到一本漫画。我不知道你以前是否看漫画，但是现在我想要给你介绍一本我喜欢的漫画。当你在看漫画的时候你觉得什么是最重要的？一个漫画家的画风或者是这本漫画的故事？我想要介绍的漫画名字叫《skip beat》。这是唯一一本我还在看的少女漫。这是关于一个在娱乐圈努力奋斗的女孩的故事。事实上，开始我并不喜欢这个动画的画风，特别是在脸型上。但当我认真的看这部漫画的时候，我改变了我的想法。现在我非常喜欢这部漫画，我喜欢所有角色的眼睛，我认为这和别的漫画都不太一样，我总是能聚焦在这些准确表达角色思想的眼睛上。或许这简单的几句话并不能表达我想说的。但如果你对漫画有一点兴趣，我觉得你一定不会失望。
I will write the Chinese again. if I couldn't express the exact meaning.Please tell me~ I am glad that you can correct my mistakes~~~
thank you very much~:)
我一直在考虑写些什么，直到我看到一本漫画。我不知道你以前是否看漫画，但是现在我想要给你介绍一本我喜欢的漫画。当你在看漫画的时候你觉得什么是最重要的？一个漫画家的画风或者是这本漫画的故事？我想要介绍的漫画名字叫《skip beat》。这是唯一一本我还在看的少女漫。这是关于一个在娱乐圈努力奋斗的女孩的故事。事实上，开始我并不喜欢这个动画的画风，特别是在脸型上。但当我认真的看这部漫画的时候，我改变了我的想法。现在我非常喜欢这部漫画，我喜欢所有角色的眼睛，我认为这和别的漫画都不太一样，我总是能聚焦在这些准确表达角色思想的眼睛上。或许这简单的几句话并不能表达我想说的。但如果你对漫画有一点兴趣，我觉得你一定不会失望。
I was thinking about what I want to write until I saw this cartoon.
I don't know whether you have read comics/manga,but now I want to introduce a cartoon that I like.
这个有一点难，因为日本动漫与漫画都较出色，如果是指定要用日本动漫与漫画，人们通常会用 Anime & Manga （就直接用，至少我那么认为）。Comics 与 cartoons 比较是在指美国或别的国家的。 卡通虽然用的没错，但通常是指看的卡通片，不是读的。
What do you think is the most important factor when reading a cartoon?
The style of the cartoonist or the story/plot?The name of this cartoon called Skip Beat.
This is the only romance (genre) comic that I am read.
genre 可以加，可以不加。小心哦，'genre'的发音有点特别。
This story is about a girl who struggles (to make a name for herself) in the entertainment industry/show biz.
I think that the word 'hard' is redundant here because 'struggle' already shows that it is something bad，haha, no one struggles in a good situation.
Actually/Frankly speaking, I initially didn't like the style/art of this cartoon,especially the face.
but when I started to read the cartoon carefully,I changed my mind.
I think that it is different from other comics.
I always focus on the eyes for I think it can exactly express the minds of the characters.
I will rewrite Chinese text
Please tell me~ I am glad if you can correct my mistakes~~~
The -> 这/那个
(The 有一点难解释,等我吧！我会去读的！）
This -〉这个 （明确的在指你刚在前几句介绍的东西）
That —> 那个 （指一个你之前介绍过的东西）
Please give me some time to go study about articles.... -.-
I like Skip Beat too ~
I liked the art right from the start, but currently, I'm rapidly losing interest in it due to the story being too draggy...
In fact,I really confusing about organize sentences.~~~~(>_<)~~~~
but I am very grateful that you help me to correct my mistakes carefully!
this is a common problem for all Manga.right?╮(╯▽╰)╭
你能告诉我我的句子是本身语言就有问题啊还是表达上不够地道？
我改的有一些错误，忘了加 ‘the’－－－ I will rewrite ｔｈｅ Chinese text
我也帮忙改了一些更好的说法。。。
write again -> rewrite
do again -> redo
build again -> rebuild
sing again -> resing (x -> 没这个字）
可以不可以加 ‘ｒｅ＇ 得自己去探索，加油！（ ´∀｀）
－－－－－－－－－－－－
Ｐ．Ｓ．
The Re- in front of certain words is call an affix, and there are many more different affixes, such as dis-, un-, in- .
http://www.uefap.com/vocab/build/building.htm