How to improve my English composition writing ~~~

  •  
  • 513
  • 0
  • 1
  • English 
Mar 21, 2009 21:10 english writing composition
Now, I'm preparing for my one year study in America as a international student. I try my best to sharpen all my ability to make progress on my English learning. However, I ecountered a difficulty on my English writing. My teachers said my compostions have weak organization. They said my ideas and thoughts of my compositions are very confused and messy. To be honest, it really was a big impact to me. I have never known there was so many problems about my writing skill. What's more, my writing grade of TOEFL also showed my writing ability is weak. I can't use concrete and clear words to support my ideas and words usage isn't idiomatic. Due to above these reasons, I decieded to try to improve my English writing by writing diaries every day. Also, I would try to write two or three compostions and ask my teachers revise them every week. I'm starting to practice this plan. I hope it could be useful and helpful for me to improve my English writing skill.
vent09
Thank you for your correction!
Mar 21, 2009 23:00
  • How to improve my English composition writing ~~~

  • How to improve my English essay writing ~~~

 
  • Now, I'm preparing for my one year study in America as a international student.

  • Now, I'm preparing for my one year study in America as an international student.

 
  • I try my best to sharpen all my ability to make progress on my English learning.

  • I am trying my best to sharpen all my abilities to make progress in my English learning.

 
  • However, I ecountered a difficulty on my English writing.

  • However, I encountered a difficulty in my English writing.

 
  • My teachers said my compostions have weak organization.

  • My teachers said my essays have weak organization.

 
  • They said my ideas and thoughts of my compositions are very confused and messy.

  • They said my ideas and thoughts of my essays were very confused and messy.

 
  • To be honest, it really was a big impact to me.

  • To be honest, it really was a big impact on me.

 
  • I have never known there was so many problems about my writing skill.

  • I didn't know there was so many problems about my writing skills.

 
  • What's more, my writing grade of TOEFL also showed my writing ability is weak.

  • What's more, my writing grade of TOEFL also showed my writing ability is weak.

 
  • I can't use concrete and clear words to support my ideas and words usage isn't idiomatic.

  • I can't use concrete and clear words to support my ideas and word usage isn't idiomatic.

 
  • Due to above these reasons, I decieded to try to improve my English writing by writing diaries every day.

  • Due to above these reasons, I decided to try to improve my English writing, by writing diaries every day.

 
  • Also, I would try to write two or three compostions and ask my teachers revise them every week.

  • Also, I want to try and write two or three essays and ask my teachers to mark them every week.

 
  • I'm starting to practice this plan.

  • I'm starting to practice this plan.

 
  • I hope it could be useful and helpful for me to improve my English writing skill.

  • I hope it could be useful and helpful for me to improve my English writing skill.

 

I think your English here is very good.
You use the word "composition" and I think "essay" is a better word.

Good luck with your English!

x

Report this entry as spam

Spam entry

Now, I'm preparing for my one year study in America as a international student. I try my best to sharpen all my ability to make progress on my English learning. However, I ecountered a difficulty on my English writing. My teachers said my compostions have weak organization. They said my ideas and


Author

MinnaIvy


Reporter

0

Close Send