My vacation is gradually going away.(;´Д`)
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1)We tried to ignore her but shestill obtruded his ideas on us. Due to her that insolent demeanors she's always doing she's now standing in the edge of precipice to possibly lose many of her friends, but she'll never discern it.
2) Due to shortfall in human resources, the web design agency couldn't but outsource some jobs to free-lancers. That's why she got works trying to make up now. How lucky she was! I can't stop begrudging her since I've been in lack of jobs for even a few months!
3)Even the most distinguished people at the conference extolled his contribution. It was superb, but could cost him a great strain in the future by feeling huge responsibility to keep such an eminent contribution all the way.
2) Due to shortfall in human resources, the web design agency couldn't but outsource some jobs to free-lancers. That's why she got works trying to make up now. How lucky she was! I can't stop begrudging her since I've been in lack of jobs for even a few months!
3)Even the most distinguished people at the conference extolled his contribution. It was superb, but could cost him a great strain in the future by feeling huge responsibility to keep such an eminent contribution all the way.

My vacation is gradually leaking away.(;´Д`)
'leaking' sounds a bit strange as in water leaking from a tap, but if you use it here, it's like saying holiday is slooooowly ending.
1)We tried to ignore her but she has still obtruded tried to impose his her ideas on us.
she - her, he - his
Sorry not quite sure?
obtruded - I understand you want to use a lot of new vocabulary. Certain words you usually use are correct, but they are very sophisticated/academic, and therefore sound a bit strange in a sentence that is still grammatically somewhat not perfect. Sorry._.
Due to her that constant insolent demeanors behaviour she's always doing she's now standing on the edge of a precipice of the possiblity of losing many of her friends, but she'll never acknowledge it.
2) Due to the shortfall of staff/money in human resources, the web design agency couldn't but outsource some of the jobs to free-lancers.
That's why she has got more work to do trying to make up for the shortfall of money/staff.
How lucky she is!
I can't stop begrudging her since I've been unable to find any jobs for even a few months!
to lack - often used to not have something - an umbrella or to lack courage....lacking a job would be very rarely used.
It was superb, but it could cost him a great strain in the future because of the feeling of huge responsibility to keep such an eminent a great contribution all the way throughout.
contribution - because it is a very limited sentence - not explaining what kind of contribution has been made beforehand, it sounds a little strange.
Eminent - used usually as a description of a person - 'an eminent psychologist'
not so much for a thing, or a job done
throughout - 'all the way through'
I apologize for perplexing you with all my writings.(゚o゚;) 英検, what I'll take in Junerequires me to memorize so many words but only meaning, and TOEIC, taking in may requires me not only memorizing words but also if I conceive their usages. (。・・。) This's why I have been keeping this practices of making sentences with those words even how it is more unpleasant for me than writing just myself. (゚Д゚)