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wolulcmit
  • As poor as Shakespeare may have been, he could have education in his home town, and could have interacted with many noblemen in the theater in which he worked.
  • As poor as Shakespeare may have been, he could have access to education in his home town, and could have interacted with many noblemen in the theater in which he worked.

Mar 11, 2013 07:39 Public Here's a TOEFL Integrat...
Squarezebra
  • As if to support the scientists, the speaker explains a certain experiment conducted by a restaurant chain to prove that color have no effect on the mood or body.
  • As if to support the scientists, the speaker refers to a certain experiment conducted by a restaurant chain to prove that color has no effect on the mood or body.

Mar 3, 2013 07:59 Public Here's a TOEFL Integrat...
Squarezebra
  • According to the author, from the ancient times, there has been a common belief that color can affect our moods.
  • According to the author, from ancient times, there has been a common belief that color can affect our moods.

Mar 3, 2013 07:59 Public Here's a TOEFL Integrat...
Squarezebra
  • The author introduces the psychological effects of color to the readers.
  • The author introduces the psychological effects of color on the readers.

Mar 3, 2013 07:59 Public Here's a TOEFL Integrat...
Zeke
  • They have professors, who specialize in their own academic field, and high-tech facilities, with which you can't do without in conducting experiments.
  • They have professors who specialize in their own academic field with access to high-tech facilities that are necessary for conducting experiments properly.

Feb 27, 2013 20:20 Public TOEFL iBT 0227.
Zeke
  • An obvious, yet sometimes forgotten reason for people to go to college or university is their motives to learn new things and deepen their knowledge.
  • An obvious, yet sometimes overlooked reason for people attending college or universities is their motives to learn new things and deepen their knowledge.

Feb 27, 2013 20:20 Public TOEFL iBT 0227.
Pyrotek
  • For example, a famous MLB player, Ichiro earns hundred millions of yen just for playing baseball a year.
  • For example, a famous MLB player, Ichiro(comma here) earns hundred millions of yen just for playing baseball a year.
  • Need the second comma after Ichiro because it interrupts the sentence. You may already know this method, but read the sentence without reading "Ichiro". It will still make sense. Just a pointer.

Oct 12, 2012 14:48 Public TOEFL Independent Task
aminowrimo
  • Although it is very important to give everyone opportunities to try their abilities, there is nothing wrong about someone earning more money as a result of a fair competition.
  • Although it is very important to give everyone opportunities to try their abilities, there is nothing wrong about with someone earning more money as a result of a fair competition.
  • While not wrong, it sounds awkward to me. I've added the 'with' instead. :)

Oct 12, 2012 14:40 Public TOEFL Independent Task
aminowrimo
  • For example, a famous MLB player, Ichiro earns hundred millions of yen just for playing baseball a year.
  • For example, a famous MLB player, Ichiro earns hundreds of millions of yen just for playing baseball a year.
  • You could write the beginning in a few ways: For example, Ichiro, a famous MLB player, earns... <- this is the preferred version. For example, a famous MLB player, Ichiro, earns...

Oct 12, 2012 14:40 Public TOEFL Independent Task
aminowrimo
  • First of all, people earn money not because they worked hard, but because they did something that others feel worth paying for.
  • First of all, people earn money not because they worked hard, but because they did something that others feel is worth paying for.

Oct 12, 2012 14:40 Public TOEFL Independent Task

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