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Junhyung34

Could u check my paragraph?

Seoul's transportation is good. Therefore, think we can live comfortable. Even though, Istanbul's transportation ...
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Mar 27th 2012 13:12
Junhyung34

Finally, it's my last paragraph . plz can u check it for me?

Istanbul has two major soccer teams. Fenerbahce and Galatasaray. Two teams are participate in the Champions League every year ...
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Mar 26th 2012 12:47
Junhyung34

I made a paragraph , could u check the my paragraph?

The Istanbul is Turkey's largest industrial center. Istanbul and surrounding provinces product are cotton, fruits,olive,...
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Mar 26th 2012 12:14
Junhyung34

I made a paragraph , could u check the my paragraph?

Both Seoul and Istanbul was caught in the traffic jam. Seoul is well developed transportation system, so the traffic jams can be ...
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Mar 26th 2012 11:08
Junhyung34

Hi i want know the way that what is the best thing to improve my essay ability. plz give me the advise.

Now i just copying to news to practice essay. Do u have idea?
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Mar 26th 2012 09:55