Finally i wrote my conclusion! wow!!! Could u check my paragraph for me???

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Apr 23, 2012 11:50
Star Wars was first released in 1997, it is still being loved.

Thanks to support from fans in February 3d version of Star Wars was released.

One’s imagination was affected a lot of people.

Star Wars is not just a movie so its influence is so big.

Although Star Wars is science fiction, lessons from Star Wars is supposed to apply in our reality.

One of lesson was that parent’s unconditional love to their child.