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Star Wars was first released in 1997, it is still being loved.
Thanks to support from fans in February 3d version of Star Wars was released.
One’s imagination was affected a lot of people.
Star Wars is not just a movie so its influence is so big.
Although Star Wars is science fiction, lessons from Star Wars is supposed to apply in our reality.
One of lesson was that parent’s unconditional love to their child.
Thanks to support from fans in February 3d version of Star Wars was released.
One’s imagination was affected a lot of people.
Star Wars is not just a movie so its influence is so big.
Although Star Wars is science fiction, lessons from Star Wars is supposed to apply in our reality.
One of lesson was that parent’s unconditional love to their child.
Finally, I wrote my conclusion! Wow!!! Could you check my paragraph for me???
Star Wars was first released in 1997, and it is still being loved.
Thanks to support from fans, in February, a 3-D version of Star Wars was released.
One’s person's imagination has affected a lot of people.
Star Wars is not just a movie, so its influence is so big.
This could go two ways. Do you mean literally that Star Wars is more than a movie (what I have in the corrections), or that it has become more than just a movie because of how big its influence is--in which case it might read better as "The huge influence Star Wars has had has made it more than just a movie."
Although Star Wars is science fiction, lessons from Star Wars is supposed to apply in our reality.
One of lesson was that of a parent’s unconditional love to for their child.
The first episode, "Phantom Menace," was released in 1999.
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The movie Star Wars was first released in 1997, and it's still loved by many. (and many people still enjoy it.)
Due to a huge demand from Start Wars fans back in February, a 3rd version of Star Wars movie was released.
It seems that one person's imagination has had a big effect on a lot of people.affect = feeling ///effect = result
Star Wars is more than just a movie and that's why it's had (such) a big following.
Although Star Wars is science fiction, (some say) the philosophical lessons taught in the movie can help us in real life.
One of these lessons was about the unconditional love a parent has for their child.