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Yoda was survived, but got sick.

In order to be more powerful, Anakin turned to the dark side.

He became the most infamous Darth Vader.

There is only 1 Darth Vadar, so you would not use 'most'. That is when you are comparing different things, and here there is only 1 Darth Vadar so it can't be compared to anything else.

He knew about the existence of his son and tried to turn him to the dark side, but his son stayed on the good side.

So Darth Vader’s boss, the emperor, tired to kill his son.

Suddenly, Darth Vader his mind turned to watch his son who was going to die.

Darth Vader killed the emperor and his life support machine was also breaking down.

Darth Vadar wanted to see his son's face without the mask before he died, and after looking at his son without a mask, he died.

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Due to the Clone Wars, only two Jedi(s) survived.

Yoda trained Anakin’s son to become the a Jedi and ("but" is better) then he passed away.

In order to be ("become" is better) more powerful, Anakin turned to the dark side.

He became the most infamous Darth Vader.

So Darth Vader’s boss, the emperor, tried to kill his son.

Darth Vader killed the emperor, and but doing that made his life support machine was also breaking start to break down.