kyu?

Kitne taron ko nind nahi aa gai !

Wah itni udas ho gai!

Kitne taron ko nind nahi aa gai! rahi! (= stars are unable to sleep) or you can use 'aai!' (=stars are not asleep)

Andhere ke parde ko tod dalo!

It's a good poem, though I don't understand how curtains could be 'broken'. XD