Being A Kind Korean
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A few days ago, when I was in a shopping mall, I saw a guy looking for a direction.
He was looking at a map of the mall.
Actually, the mall is famous because the building is like a maze.
I had been there several times, but I still don't know how to get to the store I want to go.
Anyway, I approached him and asked if there is anything I can help him with.
He said that he is looking for a bank to exchange his money.
It was almost six PM, so I said It's closed, but if he need I'll take him the bank.
While going to the bank, we made a conversation.
He said that he is from Mauritius and he is a doctor, he is visiting Korea to take part in a conference.
We exchaned email address and said goodbye.
I just got a thank-you letter from him for showing him the way.
I rarely have talked to foreigners in Korea, because of my bad English.
I'll just try to help foreigners although I would be embarrassed due to my bad English.
He was looking at a map of the mall.
Actually, the mall is famous because the building is like a maze.
I had been there several times, but I still don't know how to get to the store I want to go.
Anyway, I approached him and asked if there is anything I can help him with.
He said that he is looking for a bank to exchange his money.
It was almost six PM, so I said It's closed, but if he need I'll take him the bank.
While going to the bank, we made a conversation.
He said that he is from Mauritius and he is a doctor, he is visiting Korea to take part in a conference.
We exchaned email address and said goodbye.
I just got a thank-you letter from him for showing him the way.
I rarely have talked to foreigners in Korea, because of my bad English.
I'll just try to help foreigners although I would be embarrassed due to my bad English.
Being a Kind Korean
If an article is not the first word (well, also the last word, but that rarely happens), don't capitalize it in the title.
A few days ago, when I was in a shopping mall, I saw a guy looking for a directions.
This is usually plural here because it is generally a "set of directions". First you go here, then turn left, turn right, look for this, that, etc...
It was almost 6 p.m., so I said it's (already) closed, but if he needs/has to, then I'll I could take him to the bank / take him there.
While going to the bank, we made had a conversation.
He said that he is from Mauritius and he is a doctor. He is visiting Korea to take part in a conference.
I suggest splitting this into two sentences. You can say "and he is a doctor, and he is visiting", but I don't like the look and sound of two ANDs here.
We exchaned email addresses and said goodbye.
I have rarely talked to foreigners in Korea because of my bad English.
no need for the comma before "because"
I'll just try to help foreigners although even if I would/might be embarrassed due to my bad English.
I suggest "even if" because being "embarrassed" for me here suggests a possibility. You may or may not be embarrassed so you can't be too sure. Thus, I also suggest using "might".
And, I would say "my limted English" instead "my bad English."