Write something about Shenyang
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These days we drived to Shenyang.Before it,that I think Shenyang is a beautiful and advanced city,but I find out it was wrong!The road is very bad,and the bus is the same bad.Everywhere is dirty,like for the road,the mall,the business street and so on.I was very disappointed.Compared with Shanghai,although there are many car in Shanghai,but the traffic of Shanghai is fluent.All of the road of Shanghai is clean.The air is fresh.Maybe because it next to the sea.
Now,I consider if I have many money in the furture,I will live in Shanghai with my parents.But the prices of evetything in Shanghai is very high.This Is really a kinky problem.
Now,I consider if I have many money in the furture,I will live in Shanghai with my parents.But the prices of evetything in Shanghai is very high.This Is really a kinky problem.

These days Recently we drived drove to Shenyang.
"These days" is a period of time, not just one time. When you've been driving "these days", you were driving for a number of days, perhaps as a hobby.
Before, it,that I think thought (past tense) Shenyang is a beautiful and advanced city, but I find found (past tense) out I was wrong / it was not! The road is very bad, and the bus is the same equally as bad.
It is dirty everywhere(sounds better like this) is dirty,like for the road, the mall, the business street and so on.
Compared with Shanghai,although there are many cars in Shanghai,but the traffic flow of Shanghai is fluent smoother.
"Fluent" is for language/ ^^
All of the roads of Shanghai is are clean.
Maybe because it is next to the sea.
But the prices of everything in Shanghai is are very high.
This is really a kinky complicated problem.
This is the closest word I could think of when you meant "kinky". "Kinky" is not quite used this way. Try to limit its use with hair, clothes, or tangled stuff like strings. It can also have a sexual meaning (in slang) so you have to be careful.