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Feb 29th 2012 17:56 japan english college student
Hello(^-^)/

It snowed a good deal this morning.
I was very cold.
But,I delighted that it snowed.
Because, It was not so snowing in Yokohama.
I am going to enjoy this snow today.

nyxle
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Feb 29th 2012 18:48
  • It snowed a good deal this morning.

  • It snowed a good deal heavily this morning.

 
  • But,I delighted that it snowed.

  • But, I'm delighted that it snowed.

 
  • Because, It was not so snowing in Yokohama.

  • Because, It was not so snowing much in Yokohama.

 
雪が降っている時、いいですね。（＾＾）
Feb 29th 2012 21:21 Ando
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  • It snowed a good deal heavily this morning.

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If I may insert myself here :), "a good deal" is still TECHNICALLY correct, but it's only used in certain dialects of English. I wouldn't call it "standard" English, so if you're trying to focus on "proper" English, I'd use "heavily", as nyxle has corrected it. But, in dialects such as mine (Southern USA), "a good deal" IS used. Just... wanted to let it be known. :)
Feb 29th 2012 22:04 takumi
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Ando
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Feb 29th 2012 21:22
  • But,I delighted that it snowed.

  • But, I'm delighted that it snowed.

 
  • Because, It was not so snowing in Yokohama.

  • Because, it was not so snowing so much in Yokohama.

 
I wasn't expecting this snow at all, haha.
Mar 04th 2012 21:23 takumi
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I must study English more.>_<
Andy
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Feb 29th 2012 22:02
  • It snowed a good deal this morning.

  • It snowed a good deal this morning. この言葉は正解！。。。But, another way to say it is like this: "It snowed a lot this morning."

 
  • I am going to enjoy this snow today.

  • I am going to enjoy this the snow today. (more natural)

 
Feb 29th 2012 22:05 takumi
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ビクトリア
Mar 04th 2012 15:16
  • But,I delighted that it snowed.

  • But,I delighted that it snowed. You could combine these to say, "I was very cold but I'm delighted that it snowed."

 
  • Because, It was not so snowing in Yokohama.

  • Because, It was not so snowing in Yokohama. You could combine this even further to say, "I was very cold but I'm delighted that it snowed, because it wasn't snowing very much in Yokohama." ;)

 
Our weather is being crazy. It will snow one day and rain the next, and it will become cold and then warm outside. There are a lot of tornadoes popping up in the south right now because of this weather. >w<;
Mar 04th 2012 21:34 takumi
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This is a surprise.
Please be careful about tornadoes.
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