Practice the sentence pattern of " as well as (只要)"

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Jun 25th 2012 10:46
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http://www.iciba.com/as%20long%20as/

1.只要我的心臟還在跳動,我就要為人民工作。
>>I have to work to people as long as my heart still beating.
(check)→ As long as my heart still beats, I will go on working for the people.

*(((HELP)))*→ Why here use "beats" instead of "beating"??

2.只要你離他們遠一點,你就會安全。
>>As long as the farer you leave them, the safer you will be.
(check)→As long as you can keep away from them, you're safe.

*(((HELP)))*→ well...my sentence have a different meaning from the original, right?

3.你高興在這兒待多久就待多久。
>>You can stay here as long as you want.
(check)→You may stay here as long as you like.

*(((HELP)))*→ Also the use of "want" in here is correct, right?





=========題外=============
若想要有許多母語人士的修改最好能有幾個條件
1.表達語法大致OK,別讓人看了就頭疼
2.文章有趣
3.善於交際、搭話
4.保持發該語言文章的頻率

以上皆不具備的默默帕提還是選擇最能自救的方式練習吧...ˊ_ˋ
=======另外的題外===========
英文果然和中文用的是腦的不同區域
打完英文整個轉換不回來...