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Apr 25th 2012 11:15
>I am fond of a long term tour in Europe.
>I plan to kick off my tour in Germany. I want to enjoy all their building, especially ww2 monument. I had seen them on books before, unlike Taiwan’s dull, changeless museum, they really can make a grief successfully.
>After traveling all over the Southern Europe, Eastern Europe and West Europe, I tend to live in North Europe for period of time. Enjoying the nation of snow.
>I will take my tour if I have the time and money when I growing up. Whatever, I will accomplish the Germany to Netherlands trip just in this year’s July. :D
Mark
Thank you for your correction!
May 01st 2012 21:46
  • >I am fond of a long term tour in Europe.

  • >I am fond of a long term triptour in Europe.

 
  • I want to enjoy all their building, especially ww2 monument.

  • I'd love want to enjoy all their buildings, especially the ww2 monument.

 
  • I had seen them on books before, unlike Taiwan’s dull, changeless museum, they really can make a grief successfully.

  • I had seen them on books before, and unlike Taiwanese’s dull, changeless museums, they really can make people moved a grief successfully.

 
  • >After traveling all over the Southern Europe, Eastern Europe and West Europe, I tend to live in North Europe for period of time.

  • >After traveling all over the Southern, Europe, Eastern, Europe and Western Europe, I tend to live in the Northern Europe for a period of time.

 
  • Enjoying the nation of snow.

  • At the Northern Europe, I can Enjoying the nation of snow.

 
  • >I will take my tour if I have the time and money when I growing up.

  • >When I've grown up, I will take my triptour if whenever I have the time and money when I growing up.

 
  • Whatever, I will accomplish the Germany to Netherlands trip just in this year’s July.

  • Whatever, I will have my trip from Germany to Netherlands accomplished the Germany to Netherlands trip just in this year’s July.

 
Although I'm not a native English speaker, I hope that some of my suggestions will be helpful. BTW, I also love to travel abroad, it's fantastic.
May 01st 2012 22:13 帕提
Thanks for your help.
I am really worry about my English because the 學測 is around the corner.TwT
May 01st 2012 22:15 帕提
話說到底什麼時候要用"the"?
始終搞不清楚....
May 01st 2012 22:28 Mark
學測~好懷念呀~。我覺得妳的英文很棒了，只是台灣都喜歡考一些小地方。the的話，是當妳有指定某一個東西的時候。像妳文章中，西歐、中歐、北歐、東歐等都是妳有指定的。
May 01st 2012 22:39 帕提
當感到懷念時就代表已經老了(炸(為什麼lang-8沒有刪節線啦=3=

我的英文真的很差啦T T
還被老師當場抱怨：「明明就讀了快六年，你的英文怎麼還能這麼中式啊?!」orz

指定嗎...「I buy the apple」這樣子的可以嗎?
May 01st 2012 22:48 Mark
哈哈(刪節線用來做什麼嗎？有點害怕)。妳應該要回一下老師：「沒辦法，我是台灣人。」
I buy the apple，可以，但代表的是妳買了一個特定的蘋果。所以當妳這樣講的時候，人家可能會好奇，喔，妳買的蘋果有特殊之處喔。
所以妳可以說，I buy the apple which is in the fridge. 這樣人家就知道妳這個蘋果特殊的地方在……在冰箱。
I buy an apple，代表妳買了任何一顆蘋果。
May 01st 2012 22:58 帕提
喔喔了解owo

抱歉打錯了，不是刪節線是刪除線:p
本意是只把寫錯的部分劃掉，
而我說的是他的網路用法(通常運用在論壇):D
http://wiki.komica.org/wiki/?%E6%88%90%E5%8F%A5%2F%E5%88%AA%E9%99%A4%E7%B7%9A%E4%B8%8B%E7%9A%84%E6%89%8D%E6%98%AF%E7%9C%9F%E7%9B%B8
May 01st 2012 23:09 Mark
喔喔喔。學到一課了！我真的還沒有用過這種東西呢。
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