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Mar 20, 2012 10:43
I'm very worried about my future. I wonder what profession I get. I really want to study only english. But, there are a lot of things that I have to do beside english.
I'm annoyed because I don't know which one is first. Do I have to do what I want? or Do I have to do what I should do?? It is difficult to decide which one is first and best.
When I graduated 1 year ago, I really wanted to go abroad to study english. But I couldn't go because I had no enough money. I wish I would win the prize. If I win the prize, I will go abroad right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Modest Moose
Mar 20, 2012 10:51
  • But I couldn't go because I had no enough money.

  • But I couldn't go because I didn't have enough money

 

Mar 20, 2012 10:56 Hyoni89
Is all correct except it?????????

Mar 20, 2012 10:57 Modest Moose
Most of it is correct.

When you say, "Do I have to do what I want? or Do I have to do what I should do??" It sounds confusing.

You might try saying, "Should I do what I want, or the thing I'm expected to." That would be easier to understand.

Mar 20, 2012 11:00 Hyoni89
Oh, I see. Thank you~~~!!!!!
Secretsy08
Mar 20, 2012 11:05
  • I wonder what profession I get.

  • I wonder what profession I want to have.

 
  • I really want to study only english.

  • I really want to study english on it's own.

 
  • I'm annoyed because I don't know which one is first.

  • I'm annoyed because I don't know which one I should do first.

 
  • Do I have to do what I want?

  • Should I do what I want?

 
  • or Do I have to do what I should do??

  • Or do I want to do what I should do??

 
  • It is difficult to decide which one is first and best.

  • It is difficult to decide which one is better.

    * Or you can say:
    It is difficult to decide which one should come first.

    Using both in the same sentence sounds strange.

 
  • I wish I would win the prize.

  • I wish I would win the lottery.

    I think this is the prize you are talking about. If it is not, I am sorry.

 
  • If I win the prize, I will go abroad right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • If I won the lottery, I would go abroad right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Youngin
Jun 8, 2012 12:01
  • But, there are a lot of things that I have to do beside english.

  • But, there are a lot of things that I have to do besides focusing on learning English.

 

Good job :)

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