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Apr 18, 2013 05:56 Lisaveeta made 1 corrections for New Life
Apr 18, 2013 05:54 Lisaveeta made 9 corrections for New Life
お久しぶりです。 I was so happy when I saw your footprints on my page. I had been wondering how your exam went....Congratulations! As for love...
Apr 18, 2013 01:07 Sam_dmu made 9 corrections for New Life
Dec 31, 2012 13:06 Lisaveeta made 8 corrections for Big Day's Coming
Studying is, I'm afraid, bad for your health! Would it be possible, do you think, for you go for a walk with your dog first thing in ...
Dec 30, 2012 09:56 Daiki made 10 corrections for Big Day's Coming
I hope you do great on your exam :D
Nov 12, 2012 11:01 Lisaveeta made 9 corrections for Where are My Brothers and S...
My favourite American series are: "Six Feet Under", "The Sopranos" and "Mad Men". My favourite UK ones are ...
Nov 9, 2012 21:06 skineal made 4 corrections for Where are My Brothers and S...
That sucks. i hate to start a show and not finish it. PS - this was very well written! It seemed very natural to me.
Oct 26, 2012 10:08 カルビン made 3 corrections for Broken Heart
Yes, thats correct. You feel very sad when your heart is broken. Although I think this is a better song - http://www.youtube.com/wa...
Oct 26, 2012 09:53 Michelle commented on Broken Heart
I know that song. Fidelity by Regina Spektor. And yea. That is pretty much the definition of something breaking your heart. It means fee...
Oct 24, 2012 18:22 Lisaveeta made 4 corrections for Haruki Murakami
I wanted to look over my corrections again because I had to go out earlier and didn't have time to properly review them.
Oct 24, 2012 14:02 Lisaveeta made 9 corrections for Haruki Murakami
As usual, your English is excellent. I like Haruki Murakami too, but I have only read him in English. In particular, I like his book on r...
Oct 12, 2012 13:08 カルビン made 2 corrections for Haruki Murakami
Very well written, just a few small corrections. I like your thought process, you're very much a deep and independent thinker. How un...
Oct 12, 2012 12:39 Ronnie commented on Haruki Murakami
Seems correct to me. Maybe instead of "Here's some interesting article about" you can say "Here is an interesting art...
Oct 10, 2012 21:48 commented on Brothers & Sisters
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Oct 10, 2012 21:14 commented on Brothers & Sisters
Hello My name is Miss.(cynthia johnson);i saw your profile today and i really love it.Plz contact me at my e-mail id (cynthiajohn...
Oct 10, 2012 21:10 カルビン made 14 corrections for Brothers & Sisters
I do the same thing, I watch allot of Japanese drama's and movies. It helps not to just understand the language but also the culture....
Oct 5, 2012 06:26 Lisaveeta made 14 corrections for Reading Books in English
My kanji is still too weak for me to read Japanese literature in Japanese but I am really looking forward to the day when I can do so. I ...
Oct 3, 2012 23:08 カルビン made 20 corrections for Reading Books in English
Good work, I enjoyed reading it. Nice Journal. カオリちゃんは英語がとても上手ですね。
Oct 3, 2012 20:04 aik made 1 corrections for Swimming at the Beach
おなじく20代後半のJapaneseです。 girlfriends という表現をされていますが、どうなのでしょうか? 一語でgirlfriendといえば恋人と聞いたこともあります。けどネイティブの方が直されていないということはこのままでいいんでしょうか。girlfrie...
Sep 27, 2012 09:49 iceman10458 made 7 corrections for Toastmasters club
Public speaking can be extremely hard, especially if you do it in a foreign language. But, I think you can do it! You're writing skil...
Sep 27, 2012 09:33 カルビン made 12 corrections for Toastmasters club
頑張ってね
Aug 12, 2012 03:11 Mike made 2 corrections for Get in Shape
Nice entry. Good luck on getting into a university and getting in shape. No matter what you do, drinking plenty of water and getting en...
Aug 10, 2012 10:16 peterpatter made 7 corrections for Get in Shape
英語上手ですよ!入試は頑張って! 水泳は健康によいね!しかし私は水泳が下手です。この冬は水泳の授業を取るつもりです。 I like to run and cycle, most days I'll do one or the other for at leas...
Aug 10, 2012 10:09 Alex commented on Get in Shape
Your English is really good. At, least I didn't recognize any mistakes. Your writing has a nice flow to it. What do I do to stay in...
Aug 10, 2012 10:07 Amanda made 17 corrections for Get in Shape
You cannot start a sentence with 'so' or 'but' because it makes the sentence incomplete. Those are words that connect two...
Jul 29, 2012 09:25 Skullator made 5 corrections for Swimming at the Beach
Nope! It's always good to have some time alone.^^
Jun 19, 2012 09:57 gaiaslastlaugh made 4 corrections for Typhoon’s Coming
台風についてNHKニューズに聞こえました。九州の南から北上しているそうです。お気をつけてくださいね。 かおりさんの英語はすごい!! I heard about the typhoon on NHK news. They say it's heading ...
Jun 19, 2012 09:45 Sushi Smile made 2 corrections for Typhoon’s Coming
I hope the power plant will be OK. http://jakuten.wordpress.com/ (learn natural English online)
Jun 16, 2012 22:29 Mike made 5 corrections for Rainy season started
Very nice entry. I really enjoyed reading it! Your English is quite good.
Jun 16, 2012 18:47 Greg_vk made 2 corrections for Rainy season started
Only very minor errors I could see. Very well written overall. I also learned something new, so thank you for that. Also, thanks for post...
May 24, 2012 03:14 Steph made 1 corrections for English Lesson
That class seems quite hard - a bit like the Callan method. Don't be too hard on yourself - you are doing well!. バブバブって(笑)
May 7, 2012 13:14 distantshores made 13 corrections for Japanese Masterpieces Saved...
That sounds like a great trip! I went to Ueno on Midori no Hi and it was super busy! I didn't stay long. I'd like to go back to U...
May 6, 2012 00:55 bluezio made 13 corrections for Japanese Masterpieces Saved...
Good post! I wish I could see those masterpieces as well :-).
May 5, 2012 11:29 amjzzz commented on Japanese Masterpieces Saved...
Your English is very good and you have a lot of complex sentences. Interesting journal and it is easy to understand. You have a lot of ...
Apr 28, 2012 21:44 希望2013 commented on Sakura, Cherry blossoms
kaori It's Golden Week! You definitely deserve a needed breather. “ヽ(´▽`)ノ” I heard Japanese people are very workaholic, they work...
Apr 28, 2012 18:49 arkayuu made 10 corrections for Children's Day, Japanes...
Your English is very good and this was an interesting post! :)
Apr 20, 2012 13:34 distantshores made 9 corrections for Tokyo, Kyoto, Miyazaki
Great great entry, Kaori-san! You made use of a lot of complicated verb tenses here that were all perfect. "Had been" "...
Apr 20, 2012 12:42 Mike made 14 corrections for Tokyo, Kyoto, Miyazaki
Very nice entry. Your English is amazing! :) Sounds like you had a great time.
Apr 17, 2012 10:13 distantshores made 1 corrections for Sakura, Cherry blossoms
Great writing Kaori-san. The sakura still haven't bloomed in Fukushima, as it's still cold. But I think it will be soon. I'm ...
Apr 12, 2012 14:56 Nikku_Desu made 3 corrections for Sakura, Cherry blossoms
That picture is very beautiful! I went to hanami in Kyoto this past weekend, but the flowers were not yet in full bloom.
Apr 12, 2012 09:57 distantshores made 7 corrections for What Bangs Mean
This was a really well written entry! I almost forgot how good your English is. You used a lot of English phrases very well, like "t...
Apr 11, 2012 23:52 Kok Seng commented on Sakura, Cherry blossoms
わー、綺麗ですね。私もお花見したいです。(^^)
Apr 3, 2012 09:21 distantshores made 2 corrections for Japanese Folkstory, "T...
It really is a beautiful story, and I think it's really cool when cultures from around the world share those stories with each other....
Apr 2, 2012 22:07 bluezio made 4 corrections for Japanese Folkstory, "T...
It's strange: the illustrator seems to be Italian (according to his website), but the book is in Spanish. Funny, isn't it?
Apr 2, 2012 21:15 Michael commented on Japanese Folkstory, "T...
I really want to read this story. I have known about it for a while from Okami which is based on Japanese folklore.
Apr 2, 2012 20:54 道頓堀 made 1 corrections for Japanese Folkstory, "T...
I wonder if they will translate it into Japanese?
Mar 22, 2012 19:00 bluezio commented on Vernal Equinox Day
Very well written! I've read a bit on Japanese mythology (the story about Izanagi and Izanami, for instance) and Shinto. It's an ...
Mar 22, 2012 14:49 distantshores made 8 corrections for Vernal Equinox Day
This was really really well written! Thank you for telling us about Vernal Equinox Day. I hope you will write about Shintoism some time!
Mar 18, 2012 20:14 bluezio made 3 corrections for What spring smell do you lo...
Very nice! Tanka aren't as well known as haiku outside Japan, I think.
Mar 18, 2012 20:05 bluezio made 1 corrections for Shall We Dance?
Your English is very good, Kaori-san. There's very little to correct here :-).