Might She Understand What A Adult Said?

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Mar 10, 2012 19:59
My best friend has a little girl who is 2 years old. Sometimes she is very funny. Sometimes she is very silent.
One day, the girl was sitting on the floor palying something. My friend was cleaning the floor and complaining adout the dirty floor. He said, "If I knew earlier cleaning it would be so hard. I would never bought such the big house."
This time, the girl seemed to understand what an adult said. She stood up slowly and staggered towards her dad. She looked at her dad strangely and said to him. " Would you want to let me do it?"
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Mine Fielder
Mar 11, 2012 01:24
  • Might She Understand What A Adult Said?

  • Might She Understand What an Adult Said?

 
  • One day, the girl was sat on the floor palying something.

  • One day, the girl was sat on the floor while playing something. ("was sitting on the floor playing" would work too)

 
  • My friend was cleaning the floor and complaining of the floor.

  • My friend was cleaning the floor and complaining about the size of the floor.

 
  • He said" If I early knew to do it so hard.

  • He said "If I knew earlier cleaning it would be so hard,

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  • I never bought such the big house."

  • I would never have bought such a big house."

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  • This time, the girl seemed that she understood what a adult said.

  • This time, the girl seemed to have understood what an adult said.

 
  • She strange looked at her dad and said to him.

  • She looked at her dad strangely and said to him:

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  • " Would you want to let me do it"

  • "Would you want to let me do it?"

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Daww! Let the girl do cleaning. Just not the stoves or cupboards. Too dangerous.
"Would you want to let me do it?" would imply bad things or ill-will if such a thing were to occur. The girl could hold a grudge later or simply think it is ill-advised.

Thank you for your correction!

 
Mar 11, 2012 08:10 lxf
  • Thanks, Sygish. Her dad did not want to let her clean the door. I think that the girl did not understant what her dad said because she is so little. This was coincidental.

 
Mar 11, 2012 08:18 lxf
  • Have anice day and take care, Sygish.
Haley
Mar 11, 2012 04:22
  • One day, the girl was sat on the floor palying something.

  • One day, the girl sat on the floor while playing with something.

 
  • My friend was cleaning the floor and complaining of the floor.

  • My friend was cleaning the floor and complaining about the dirt/floor.

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Mar 11, 2012 08:11 lxf
  • Thanks Haley. Have a nice day!
Sedgehead
Mar 11, 2012 06:08
  • Sometimes she is very funny.

  • Sometimes she is very funny and at other times she is very quiet..

 
  • He said" If I early knew to do it so hard.

  • He said, "If I early knew to do it so hard." (Rules to remember: 1) close your quotation marks (I always forget that myself), 2) use a space after a comma (but before opening parenthesis).)

 
Thank you for your correction!

 
Mar 11, 2012 08:18 lxf
  • I remembered that you have ever written a passage about how to use punctuation yet. Thanks, Sedghead. Have a nice day!

 
Mar 11, 2012 12:59 Sedgehead
  • Look for my "little things" blogs on the internet for more details.
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