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Feb 25th 2012 20:15

Today, I saw a film. That is,"The King's Speech.". We wanted to see it at 9:40. But my father's friend had a problem and let us helped him. So we couldn't see it. Then, we planned to see the film at 12:10. But my father still had a problem. Finally, we saw it at 3:30. It was a fantastic movie. I love it a lot

Peter 小芒果~오윤재

Feb 26th 2012 07:03

That is,"The King's Speech.".
That is The film was,"The King's Speech.".

We wanted to see it at 9:40.
We wanted to see it at 9:40,

But my father's friend had a problem and let us helped him.
but my father's friend had a problem and so we let us helped him.

So we couldn't see it.
So we couldn't see the filmit.

I love it a lot
I love it a lot!

Your English is really good! (^_^) Keep up the great writing! I, too, enjoyed <<The King's Speech>>, I thought it was a great movie, I'm glad you enjoyed it too! Oh, and just one more comment, usually in English we tend to say, "I saw a movie" rather than , "I saw a film". They are both correct, but it if you say movie instead of film you'll sound more like a native speaker! (^_^) Keep up the great writing!