My Day
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Today, my good friend came my house and played with me. I was very happy. We bought some beautiful cords , some nice stickers and a picture of diamonds. And our lunch are very nice. Then, we played the computer games about make ice creams. My friend left at around 5:00. I didn't want her to go and she also wanted to stay in my house and played with me for a long time.
This was my wonderful day.
This was my wonderful day.
Today, my good friend to came my house and played with me. （虽然这个句子没有语法错误，它有点不标准。我觉得你想把“来往”或者“玩”翻译到英文。可是我们不怎么说“play”因为有点优质的感觉。"Today my good friend came to my house for a visit" 更好.
We bought some beautiful cards , some nice stickers and a picture of diamonds.
And our lunch was very nice.
Then, we played the computer games about making ice cream.
I didn't want her to go. She also wanted to stay at my house to play (一样的情况，"to visit"更好) with me for a longer time.
Then, we played computer games on how to make ice cream.
Today, my good friend came over to my house.
And we had a nice lunch...
Then, we played a computer game in which you make ice creams.