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Feb 10th 2012 22:57
Today, I did my all homework and I felt relax. I went to swimming with my father, too. We were very happy at that time. Because I could swim 600m. But when I went back home and I was very tired and hungry. My dinner was very nice and I ate a lot. After that, I played the piano for one hour. I am sleepy now and I will go to sleep.
Arturo
Feb 11th 2012 04:59
  • Today, I did my all homework and I felt relax.

  • Today, I did my all homework and I felt relaxed.

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  • I went to swimming with my father, too.

  • I, also, went to swimming with my father, too.

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  • We were very happy at that time.

  • We were very happy at that time. because I could swim 600m.

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Feb 11th 2012 08:46 lxf
Thanks for helping me. Have a nice day!
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