Rington
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I have readen the entry for Rington in yours guidebook "Around Britain". I have to congratulate you, because the guidebook is very complete. But I think that it would be improve in some aspects.
Firstly, when you talk about the gifts of the souvenir shops, you could mention too, besides local honey and jam, the little clocks mades by the old artisan of the town. As for the "Dylan's", nowadays, the prices don't be too expensive. They have a cheaper menu for the tourists. Finally, the river isn't as polluted as a few years ago. Now, laws are more stricts, and people respect the river very much.
That is all, I hope that my advices will be useful for you.
Yours faithfully.
I have readen the entry for Rington in yours guidebook "Around Britain". I have to congratulate you, because the guidebook is very complete. But I think that it would be improve in some aspects.
Firstly, when you talk about the gifts of the souvenir shops, you could mention too, besides local honey and jam, the little clocks mades by the old artisan of the town. As for the "Dylan's", nowadays, the prices don't be too expensive. They have a cheaper menu for the tourists. Finally, the river isn't as polluted as a few years ago. Now, laws are more stricts, and people respect the river very much.
That is all, I hope that my advices will be useful for you.
Yours faithfully.
I have read the entry for Rington in your guidebook "Around Britain".
I would like [more polite] to congratulate you, because the guidebook is very complete.
But I think that it could be improved in some aspects.
Firstly, when you talk about the gifts of the souvenir shops, you could mention too, besides local honey and jam, the little clocks made by the old artisan of the town.
As for the "Dylan's", nowadays, the prices aren't too expensive. / recently the prices have dropped.
They have a cheaper menu for the tourists.
Finally, the river isn't as polluted as it was a few years ago.
Now, laws are more strict_and people respect the river very much.
That is all, I hope that my advice will be useful for you. ["Advice" is almost never plural.]