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Jan 08th 2012 18:56
I just start lang-8 program. This is my first blog at lang-8.

My English skill isn't perfect and I couldn't use with business yet.

So I've been studying English hard since 3 years ago.

3 years ago, I went to New Zealand with working holiday Visa.

My English skill was improved at that time however I need more English skill for business.

I've disided to go abroad again to study English.

I'm going to Philippins since this Aplil for 1 year.

I hope to improve my English and to use for business.


Thank you
Yohei
Karen
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 08th 2012 19:00
  • I just start lang-8 program.

  • I just started this lang-8 program.

 
  • My English skill isn't perfect and I couldn't use with business.

  • My English skill isn't perfect and I couldn't use it in business settings.

 
  • 3 yards ago, I've been to New Zealand with working holiday Visa.

  • 3 years ago, I went to New Zealand with a working holiday Visa.

 
  • My English skill was improved at that time however I need more English skill for business.

  • My English skill was improved at that time. However, I need more to improve my English skill for business.

 
  • I've disided to go abroad again to study English.

  • I've decided to go abroad again to study English.

 
  • I'm going to Philippins since this Aplil for 1 year.

  • I'm going to the Philippines since this April for 1 year.

 
  • I hope to improve my English and to use for business.

  • I hope to improve my English and to use it for business.

 
That's great! I am from the Philippines. I have many friends who are Japanese exchange students, who are also here to learn English. I hope it works out well for you.

Good luck! ^^
Jan 08th 2012 19:07 Yohei
Thanks Karen. Oh you live in the philippines now? Great. I perhaps go to near Manila.
BlueBossa
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 08th 2012 19:46
  • My English skill isn't perfect and I couldn't use with business yet.

  • My English skill isn't perfect and I can't use it for business yet.

 
  • 3 years ago, I went to New Zealand with working holiday Visa.

  • 3 years ago, I went to New Zealand on a working holiday Visa.

 
Good luck in the Phillipines. Your English is very good already.
bennatan
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 09th 2012 03:15
  • My English skill isn't perfect and I couldn't use with business yet.

  • My English isn't fluent enough for use in the business world.

 
  • So I've been studying English hard since 3 years ago.

  • To improve I've been studying English assiduously for the last three years. I thought you might be interested to see what might be a new word for you. http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/assiduous

 
  • 3 years ago, I went to New Zealand with working holiday Visa.

  • Three years ago I went to New Zealand on a working holiday visa.

 
  • My English skill was improved at that time however I need more English skill for business.

  • My English improved with the experience I gained there, however I need to continue to study if I 'm going to meet my goal. I changed the wording because you already told us that you needed better English for business purposes.

 
  • I'm going to Philippins since this Aplil for 1 year.

  • I'm going to the Philippines this April for a one year stay.

 
  • I hope to improve my English and to use for business.

  • I hope to improve my English so I can use it for business.

 
Perhaps you will find the different ways of expression I have used to be of value.
Jan 09th 2012 08:06 Yohei
Thanks David. Your correction is great. I got new expression!!
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