One of unknown place

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Dec 14, 2017 10:53
An owner of a wood company filmed the changing seasons in his countryside, and now the place is visited by many tourists. The owner is proud about the attention, but he doesn't want people to rush out to visit here. The place need to be more high maintenance for tourists than other country sides because the tourism association would engage a bunch of them. If you want to visit there, make sure to understand how you will be abide their rules until the tourism association's preparation.
David
Dec 15, 2017 04:03
  • One of unknown place

  • An Unknown Place

 
  • An owner of a wood company filmed the changing seasons in his countryside, and now the place is visited by many tourists.

  • An owner of a wood company filmed the changing seasons in the local countryside, and now the place is (being) visited by many tourists.

    The word in parentheses ( ) is optional.

 
  • The owner is proud about the attention, but he doesn't want people to rush out to visit here.

  • The owner is [proud of / happy about] the attention, but he doesn't want people to rush out to visit there.

 
  • The place need to be more high maintenance for tourists than other country sides because the tourism association would engage a bunch of them.

  • The [place / area / location] [needs / requires] [more / a higher level of] [maintenance / management] than other [countryside / rural / similar] locations in order to cater for large numbers of tourists, since the local tourism association is not able to meet current demand.

 
  • If you want to visit there, make sure to understand how you will be abide their rules until the tourism association's preparation.

  • If you [want / would like] to visit there, (please) [make sure / ensure] that you understand and abide by their rules until the tourism association's preparations are [implemented / completed].

 

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