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I was tired and bored yesterday. I had a headache. I had a toothache. I had a cold. Oh! I was tired. I wanted to sleep.
I didn’t like yesterday. Because I had a cold yesterday and yesterday’s homework was too many! Yesterday evening, afrer dinner, I went to the hospital, saw a doctor. Then, I went home. I played sports.
At 9 o’clock pm, I did my math homework and English homework. At 9:30, I ate two steamed breads. At 10:00, I took a shower. Next, I did my language and literature homework. I must to wrote a composition.
At 11:00, it was later. I took Chinese herbal medicine. Then, I have to sleep. I slept well yesterday.
Today, I feel better. I don’t have a headache. I don’t have a toothache. But I still have to wipe off snivel. I have more energy. I'm able to focus a little better, and those are important things.
I didn’t like yesterday. Because I had a cold yesterday and yesterday’s homework was too many! Yesterday evening, afrer dinner, I went to the hospital, saw a doctor. Then, I went home. I played sports.
At 9 o’clock pm, I did my math homework and English homework. At 9:30, I ate two steamed breads. At 10:00, I took a shower. Next, I did my language and literature homework. I must to wrote a composition.
At 11:00, it was later. I took Chinese herbal medicine. Then, I have to sleep. I slept well yesterday.
Today, I feel better. I don’t have a headache. I don’t have a toothache. But I still have to wipe off snivel. I have more energy. I'm able to focus a little better, and those are important things.
I didn’t like yesterday.
Period not needed. Fits into a sentence with next correction.
because I had a cold yesterday and yesterday’s homework was too much!
At 9 o’clock pm, I did my math homework and English homework.
"O'clock" not need, it was implied by the PM aready.
I didn’t like yesterday.
Last 3 sentences are good in illustrating such a negative effect.
Because I had a cold yesterday and yesterday’s homework was too many much!
Yesterday evening, after dinner, I went to the hospital, and saw a doctor.
At 9 o’clock pm, I did my math homework and English homework.
At 9:30, I ate two pieces of steamed breads.
I must to wrote a composition.
I'm not sure about your meaning here. Would help if you post that sentence in Mandarin
At 11:00, it was later.
I don’t have a no more headaches or toothaches.
I don’t have a toothache.
But I still have to wipe off snivel.
Same here, not sure about meaning. Would help if you post that sentence in Mandarin
I'm able to focus a little better, and those are important things.
Same here too, the original sentence in Chinese please.
您需要的中文原句：
1、我需要写一篇作文。
2、但我依然需要擤鼻涕。
3、我能够集中注意力了，这是很重要的。
您需要的中文原句：
1、我需要写一篇作文。
2、但我依然需要擤鼻涕。
3、我能够集中注意力了，这是很重要的。
您需要的中文原句：
1、我需要写一篇作文。
2、但我依然需要擤鼻涕。
3、我能够集中注意力了，这是很重要的。
2. But I still have to rub my nose.
3. I'm able to focus better, and this is important.