Please correct it!!!

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Jul 5, 2009 11:26
I have to write essay in the school.
The topic is "Describe what your life will be like in 20 years"
So please correct it!!

When I was 37 years old, I'll been married to my husband for 8 years.
While working, I'll raise two children.
We'll live in big apartment.
I'll have two daughters one of whom is7 and another one is 5.
They will be so cute!!!
We'll be a double-income family.
So ny husband will be cooperative to housework.
I'll like my work, so I'll continue my work.
My husband will understand my opinion about that.
I'll enjoy shopping with my daughters or my friends and having a good meal with my family in my weekend.

I'll be fortunate to have good family and to have work worlth doing.