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Apr 18th 2009 17:27
I want to send a mail to my host mother.

So please correct it and tell me a nice phrase.


Hello.

How are you?

I miss you.

A new school term began.

We became grade-11th.

Now, cherryblossom is a very beautiful season.

So I am sending a mail with cherryblossom’s pictures.
Shinn
Apr 18th 2009 17:36
  • Please collect it!!

  • Please correct it!!

 
  • I want to send a mail to my host mother.

  • I want to send an e-mail to my host mother.

 
  • So please correct it and tell me a nice phrase.

  • So please correct it and recommend some nice phrases.

 
  • A new school term began.

  • A new school term has begun.

 
  • We became grade-11th.

  • We became grade-11th. Who is "we"?

 
  • Now, cherryblossom is a very beautiful season.

  • Now it is cherry blossom season, and it is very beautiful.

 
  • So I am sending a mail with cherryblossom’s pictures.

  • So I decided to send you an e-mail with some cherry blossom pictures (so that you can see it!).

 
Be careful to not confuse "l" with "r".
Ryoka
Apr 19th 2009 11:06
Thank you!!

I visited Canada with my classmates last month.

So "We" is I and my classmates.

I want to visit Canada again.
Shinn
Apr 19th 2009 11:33
  • We became grade-11th.

  • We are in the 11th grade now.

 
Usually we don't count grades. Are you a 高校３年生? If you are, then you could say "We are now Juniors in high school."
Ryoka
Apr 25th 2009 11:56
Thank you !!

Now I'm 高校２年生.

It is difficult for me to count grades in English.
Shinn
Apr 25th 2009 13:33
We say "(high school) sophomore" for 高校２年生.
Ryoka
Apr 25th 2009 20:45
I see.
Thank you!!
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