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Where there is no struggle, there is no strength. -- Oprah Winfrey
This is my favorite word , I know nobaby can get success without working hard in the world , sometimes, when I do my best to doing a thing ,I am sure I will be successful ,but at last, I awlays failed .Oh ,my God , I feel disappoint and lose my heart . At this time , My friends will give me encouragement ,this is a large power that make me have courage to do anything and face all the difficult in the future . At last ,I do not know how may faults I made in this passage ,I know my enlish is very bad ,in spite of I have learning it a long time .It is very difficult for me ,ha ha
This is my favorite word , I know nobaby can get success without working hard in the world , sometimes, when I do my best to doing a thing ,I am sure I will be successful ,but at last, I awlays failed .Oh ,my God , I feel disappoint and lose my heart . At this time , My friends will give me encouragement ,this is a large power that make me have courage to do anything and face all the difficult in the future . At last ,I do not know how may faults I made in this passage ,I know my enlish is very bad ,in spite of I have learning it a long time .It is very difficult for me ,ha ha

This is my favorite word quote; I know nobody can get success without working hard in the world. Sometimes, when I do my best to doing a something, I am sure (that) I will be successful, but at last, in the end I always failed .
Oh my God, I feel disappointed and lose my heart lose the will. ( "lose my heart" is for romantic contexts. Also, I think it sounds better if you leave out "Oh my God".)
At this During these times, my friends will give me encouragement. This is a large great power that makes me have the courage to do anything and face all the difficulties in the future .
At last ,I do not know how many faults I made in this passage. I know my English is very bad, in spite of me having been learning it for a long time .
It is very difficult for me, ha ha.