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I'm a first time to write this diary amd invite Lang-8
So I'm very interesting this hp and want to learn English writing skills.
My English skills are like little baby... oh my god , , ,, ,
But I'll try to learn English by inviting here and I hope you will help me kindly like people teach baby,, hahaha
I'm very thank you for reading this diary.
And please get something correct this diary.
Thank you.
So I'm very interesting this hp and want to learn English writing skills.
My English skills are like little baby... oh my god , , ,, ,
But I'll try to learn English by inviting here and I hope you will help me kindly like people teach baby,, hahaha
I'm very thank you for reading this diary.
And please get something correct this diary.
Thank you.

I'm It's / It is a my first time to writing this a diary amd invite on Lang-8.
So I'm (I am) very interesting hoping that this hp site and will help me want to learn and improve my English writing skills. (I did not quite understand your sentence here, so I just assumed that this was what you were trying to say)
My English skills are like a little baby...
But I'll (I will) try to learn English by inviting studying here. and I hope you will help me kindly like how people teach a baby, hahaha.
I'm (I am) very thankful of you for reading this diary. (You can also just say "Thank you for reading my diary" so it sounds more natural)
And please get something correct this diary it (for me). (I crossed out "this diary" because it is already understood in your last sentence that your diary is the subject)
So I'm very interested in this site and want to learn English writing skills.
Thank you for reading, and please correct this diary.
And please get something correct this diary.