Reunion (10/June/2012)
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I saw one of Korean friends, who I met in Tokyo.
He used to work at the restaurant which I went to often.
We had meal together with our friends at times at the time.
Now, he is in Sydney, and I came to Sydney several days ago.
I tried to contact him, and I managed it.
We had dinner at a Korean restaurant tonight.
He said he had some problems about life in Sydney.
One of them was English.
He couldn't speak English whereas he could speak Japanese well.
Another one was his flatmate.
He wanted to move to another place, so I would help to find one.
Toshi, my ex-class mate, Joined us.
Last time I met him was 6 months ago, and we were students of the same school in Sydney.
We enjoyed chatting, eating and drinking.
Donji, the Korean friend, had to work tomorrow, so we decided to go home early.
We were going to a Karaoke next next weekend.
I am looking forward to it.
He used to work at the restaurant which I went to often.
We had meal together with our friends at times at the time.
Now, he is in Sydney, and I came to Sydney several days ago.
I tried to contact him, and I managed it.
We had dinner at a Korean restaurant tonight.
He said he had some problems about life in Sydney.
One of them was English.
He couldn't speak English whereas he could speak Japanese well.
Another one was his flatmate.
He wanted to move to another place, so I would help to find one.
Toshi, my ex-class mate, Joined us.
Last time I met him was 6 months ago, and we were students of the same school in Sydney.
We enjoyed chatting, eating and drinking.
Donji, the Korean friend, had to work tomorrow, so we decided to go home early.
We were going to a Karaoke next next weekend.
I am looking forward to it.
I saw one of my Korean friends, who I first met in Tokyo.
Adding 'my' makes the sentence correct. Using 'first' is optional.
He used to work at the restaurant which I went to often.
Or you could say 'He used to word at a restaurant that I often visited'.
We had a meal together with our friends at times at the time.
Since 'meal' is singular, you need to put 'a' in front of it.
Now, he is in Sydney, and I arrived in Sydney several days ago.
Sentence still sounds weird. Try, 'I arrived in Sydney several days ago, where he now resides'.
I tried to contact him, and succeeded.
Toshi, my ex-class mate joined us.
You need only capitalize the first letter of the first word in this sentence.
The last time I met him was 6 months ago, when we were students in the same school in Sydney.
Donji, my Korean friend, had to work tomorrow, so we decided to go home early.
Or 'we decided to leave early' you could say.
We are going to a karaoke bar next next weekend.
'are going' sounds better, since 'were going' implies you're not going again (conditional tense).
I am very sorry that I checked this too late.