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First, I surprised this kind of TV program is broadcasted in the US, just introducing some celebrities' tweet.
I felt celebrities truly don't have their private.
Of course, to tweet is showing their private life out. It is already no privacy there.
We never seen such kind of regular TV program, showing someone's tweet.
Next, I surprised what Justin did for revenging.
But I can understand his feeling. At the same time, I think he was too young and he did not think deeply what happens after he post the number.
Well, just middle of the writing above, I found that I don't know who Justin Bieber is.
Is he a cinema or TV star, singer or richer's son?
I felt celebrities truly don't have their private.
Of course, to tweet is showing their private life out. It is already no privacy there.
We never seen such kind of regular TV program, showing someone's tweet.
Next, I surprised what Justin did for revenging.
But I can understand his feeling. At the same time, I think he was too young and he did not think deeply what happens after he post the number.
Well, just middle of the writing above, I found that I don't know who Justin Bieber is.
Is he a cinema or TV star, singer or richer's son?
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Justin Bieber seeks revenge against his enemy. -series of inspired by youtube-
Firstly, I am surprised this kind of TV program is broadcasted in the US. It just explains some celebrities' tweets.
I feel celebrities truly don't have their privacy.
Of course, to tweet is share their private life.
There is already no privacy there.
We don't get such kinds of regular TV programs, showing someone's tweet(s).
Next, I am surprised at what Justin did for revenge.
But I can understand his feelings.
At the same time, I think he was too young and he did not think deeply about what would happen after he posted the number.
Well, just in the middle of writing the above, I realised that I don't know who Justin Bieber is.
Is he a cinema or TV star, singer or rich person's son?
I have a question. Why I should use "Firstly" instead of "First"?
Can I use Firstly in academic writing as well?
I should change one correction! As you are making a list (you make 2 separate comments about the video), you use firstly, secondly.
Alternatively, if you are referring to the order of your reactions to the video, perhaps it would be better to use "At first". Then instead of "next", use "then"
Secondly, I am surprised at what Justin did for revenge.
I understood your points as follows;
When I started using Firstly then I should continue like Secondly, Thirdly.. and so on.
And if I started by using At first, I should continue then..
Thank you so much.
The reason I mentioned Firstly/First is because I am taking a TOEFL English test preparation course. In TOEFL exam, there is writing section which I need to write 2 essays in limited time.
When I use "Firstly" in the writing class, teachers correct it to "First". So I was thinking that First is suitable for academic writing.
Then I thought by your correction, Firstly is preferable for diaries and First is for academic or professional writing.
Your continuous help would be very much appreciated.
le