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Besides drinking coffee, reading is another hobby of mine. I began to read when I was a little child, about 6 years old. At that time, my favorite book was Doraemon. It was a famous comic of Japan and it's stil famous now. I read a lot of Japanese comic. They're really my childhood.
When I grown up a little, I started to read another kinds of books. I read literature books for children. Most of them were from Vietnam.
Now I'm an adult. And I still keep reading books when I have free time. I read many kinds of books: fictions, unfictions, novels, poems... and of course comics. My favorite book is "Gone with the wind". I like the way Scarllet thinking because she was a strong woman. But I don't like the way she loved. So I had a little regret when it was over because I didn't know whether Scarllet and Reth were together or not. Then I read "Gone with the wind 2". Although it wasn't written by the author of "Gone with the wind" but I still felt the spirits of Scarllet and Reth there. And I was happy because they were still together at last. I always like happy ending.
I also like Harry Potter and New Moon. Although I prefer reading than watching films of them. Recently, I usually reading Chinese and Japanese books. Chinese books help me to get out of stress because they're often over with happy ending. But Japanese books always make me thinking a lot when reading. I've just finished reading a Japanese book named "Socrates in love". That is the name when it was pulished in Vietnam. Its official name is "Crying Out Love, In the Center of the World" in Japan. It was a sad love story but I think I like it. It express the real life.
I want to tell more about this but my journal is too long now. Please correct my sentences. Thank you very much indeed.
When I grown up a little, I started to read another kinds of books. I read literature books for children. Most of them were from Vietnam.
Now I'm an adult. And I still keep reading books when I have free time. I read many kinds of books: fictions, unfictions, novels, poems... and of course comics. My favorite book is "Gone with the wind". I like the way Scarllet thinking because she was a strong woman. But I don't like the way she loved. So I had a little regret when it was over because I didn't know whether Scarllet and Reth were together or not. Then I read "Gone with the wind 2". Although it wasn't written by the author of "Gone with the wind" but I still felt the spirits of Scarllet and Reth there. And I was happy because they were still together at last. I always like happy ending.
I also like Harry Potter and New Moon. Although I prefer reading than watching films of them. Recently, I usually reading Chinese and Japanese books. Chinese books help me to get out of stress because they're often over with happy ending. But Japanese books always make me thinking a lot when reading. I've just finished reading a Japanese book named "Socrates in love". That is the name when it was pulished in Vietnam. Its official name is "Crying Out Love, In the Center of the World" in Japan. It was a sad love story but I think I like it. It express the real life.
I want to tell more about this but my journal is too long now. Please correct my sentences. Thank you very much indeed.
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It was a famous comic in Japan and it's still famous now.
I read a lot of Japanese comics.
Once I grew up a little, I started to read other kinds of books.
Most of them are from Vietnam.
Now I'm an adult, and I still keep reading books when I have free time.I think you should combine this sentence with the previous sentence like I've done here.
I read many kinds of books: fictions, unfictions, novels, poems...
I like the way Scarllet thought because she was a strong woman.
Although it wasn't written by the author of "Gone with the wind" but I still felt the spirits of Scarllet and Reth there.
And I was happy because they were still together at last. I think you can only say "still together" or "together at last" but not both.
I always like happy endings.
Recently, I usually reading Chinese and Japanese books.
Chinese books help me to relieve stress because they often have a happy ending.
But Japanese books always make me thinking a lot when reading.
That is the name it had when it was published in Vietnam.
I want to write more about this but my journal is getting too long now.
This was interesting to read, thank you!
At that time, my favorite book was Doraemon, which was a famous Japanese comic and is still famous today. (I've added the next sentence here.)
It was a famous comic of Japan and it's stil famous now.
I read a lot of Japanese comics; they're really my childhood. (Here I've joined the two sentences together with a semi colon because even though they can be separate, they have a close link and work better together.)
They're really my childhood.
When I grew up a little, I started to read other kinds of books. (Good paragraphing here.)
Now I'm an adult, I still read in my free time. (Good paragraphing again.)
And I still keep reading books when I have free time.
I read many kinds of books: fictions, non-fictions, novels, poems...
and of course, comics.
My favorite book is "Gone with the Wind".
However, I don't like the way she loved.
Then I read "Gone with the Wind 2".
Even though it wasn't written by the author of "Gone with the Wind", but I still felt the spirits of Scarllet and Reth there; I was happy because they were together at last.
And I was happy because they were still together at last.
I also like the Harry Potter and New Moon books. (Good paragraphing.)
Although I prefer reading the books more than watching the films of them. (Here you're making a comparison so need to list the two types of media.)
However, Japanese books always make me thinking a lot when reading.
I've just finished reading a Japanese book called "Socrates in Love".
That is the title when it was published in Vietnam. (A 'title' is what we call books.)
Its official title is "Crying Out Love, In the Center of the World" in Japan.
Another good job Hoai, good paragraphing and sentence structure. Keep it up!