Indecision

Today I went to MediaWorld to a Vodafone Point not only to give my Curriculum Vitae, but to see the tablets and the smartphones.

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Table and phone aren't proper nouns so don't capitalise outside of first word in sentence.

Now I have an LG phone and my intention is to continue to utilize my LG but I think is better to use the tablet for the navigation and internet. Recently in Italy the new I-Pad by Apple arrived, but I prefer a Samsung product not only because it is cheaper with respect to the iPad, but I like Korean electronic products and maybe in the future I'll buy the tablet.

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At the moment the best offer at one of the Vodafone Points, you can buy the tablet with a monthly plan or rechargeable to 20 max 50 euro.

20 max 50 euro sounds wrong but I'll assume it is marketer speak

Probably I see in the Vodafone Point the offer for the smartphone only for the new LG smartphone called LG Optimus L3 with a big 3.2" display and 16 milion colours with a 5 megapixel camera, Android operating system and other Android applications free in Google Play.

these are nouns ... you don't say "X noun of Y description"

This LG smartphone is only available with a monthly plan of 10 euro with infinity message and internet data of 500 MB, so I'm in an indecisive moment but I think the tablet is better.

same deal here

Actually with my LG phone I have Internet but I don't use the Internet by the phone because some pages don't have a good result of definition and my opinion is in this case is it is better on a tablet; yes, it is much bigger than the smartphone, but has an optimal definition and a fast internet wi-fi connection.

LG Optimus L3 with its large 3.2'' display, Wi-Fi and Hi-Speed Internet and browser you can surf as you would on your PC!

It is thanks to the original square design and meticulous attention to detail, like the silver profile and the back cover working with exclusive "3D patterning" by LG.

And this is one version of the Samsung tablet: a large display and a powerful tablet at a thickness well below a centimetre, a powerful dual core processor, the latest version of the Android operating system Honeycomb, designed just for the tablet, the advantage of always being connected while mobile, faster than many home connections thanks to HSPA + 3G card, the convenience of being fully compatible with Adobe Flash, hundreds of thousands of applications ready to use for each and every need.

Simply everything you could want from a tablet.

Born to meet the mobility needs of technology enthusiasts on-the-go, Galaxy Tab 8.9 is the perfect travel companion to take with him and to be entrusted with any type of mission critical work, entertainment, social networking, gaming ...

nothing is unattainable for Galaxy Tab 8.9, which confines its 8.9-inch screen in a chassis weighing only 465 grams with a thickness of only 8.6 mm.

A tablet to handle and pleasant to hold, thanks to the powerful 1 GHz dual core processor it can handle HD video and high-definition games without problems.

Nothing can stop Galaxy Tab 8.9 when it comes to web browsing, thanks to seamless integration of Adobe Flash technology that allows him to visit the more complex sites .

All this at a higher data transfer rate, provided the support to the fast HSPA up to 21 Mbps, which is accompanied by the assurance provided by Wi-Fi, for downloading, browsing and chat without flaws while fully mobile.

In addition, the new home page, which debuted dynamic panels updated in real time, is even more convenient and intuitive. Please be prepared to touch your bookmarks, mail, photos and social notifications.

The Galaxy Tab 8.9 knows how to bring order to the media that we enjoy.

Thanks to the "hub", reading, talking and listening to music has never been so intuitive and enjoyable.

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The Readers Hub provides access to millions of books, hundreds of newspapers and monthly magazines in various languages, to be read on the bright display using advanced bookmark functions, dynamic zoom and zoom font.

With the Social Hub emails, text messages and social networking site bookmarks are organized and unified to never lose the "thread of discourse." The Music Hub is "roccheggiare" your tablet with a catalogue full of new music and classic, choose from accessing information about the artist or reviews, all at your touch.

1 year subscription to Corriere della Sera and Gazzetta dello Sport Digital Edition for Galaxy Tab 8.9 are included exclusively for Samsung,

So you can browse directly with your Samsung tablet world news and sports that interest you most, at any time, anywhere.

Discover also all other applications including those selected for you and for all ages including games, films, fairy tales for children and much more.

In addition, in the Android Market, you will have access to more than 200,000 applications with many free.

Naturally I see in the Vodafone Point various models and I don't know all the applications but I prefer the new Samsung tablet, the Galaxy Tab 10.1, it's amazing.

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