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Apr 29th 2009 13:22
My lang-8 friend gave me 3 English words.
ラング８の友達が私に英語の３つの言葉をくれました。

I tried to use them and made sentences.
私はそれらを使って、文を作りました。

Here are the words "pickle, improve and drink."
「ピクルス」「向上」「飲む」がその言葉です。

Here is my writing　below.
以下が私の文章です。

I hated pickles when I was young.
私は子供のころ、ピクルスが嫌いですした。

I always ordered a hamburger without pickles at McDonald's but somehow I love pickles now.
マクドナルドでは、いつも、ピクルス抜きのハンバーガーを注文していましたが、なぜだか、今はピクルスが好きです。

When I was sick, my mum tried to let me drink ginger tea to get my health improve but I hated it.
私が病気の時、母は、私の体調を良くしようと、しょうが茶を飲ませましたが、私は嫌いでした。

After growing up, I can drink　it.
大人になると、私はそれを飲むことが出来ます。

Is there any food or drink which you couldn't eat before but now you love to eat?
子供のころ、食べれなかったり、飲めなかったものが、今は好きなものはありますか？

Thank you for your reading.
誰かさん
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 29th 2009 13:29
  • When I was sick, my mum tried to let me drink ginger tea to get my health improve but I hated it.

  • When I was sick, my mum tried to make me drink ginger tea to improve my health but I hated it.

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Mm, I can't think of any foods like that, but there aren't many foods I hate.

I don't like dry drinks very much though, I didn't when I was small either... I wish I could like them ^^ I feel childish not being able to drink anything dry.
bon
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 29th 2009 13:31
  • Here are the words "pickle, improve and drink."

  • The words are "pickle, improve and drink."

 
  • When I was sick, my mum tried to let me drink ginger tea to get my health improve but I hated it.

  • When I was sick, my mum tried to make me drink ginger tea to get better but I hated it.

 
Mmm I can't think of anything. I guess I'm the same when it comes to beef, only I liked beef and in general meat a lot when I was younger, but nowadays I really can't eat a lot. I'm not a vegetarian, but I enjoy vegetables more.
tomo
Apr 29th 2009 14:05
誰かさんへ、
Thank you for your corrections and comments. I don't know" dry drinks" What are they?

bonさんへ、
Thank you for your corrections and comments. The same as you. I eat more vegetables than meat now. I try to eat healthy foods but I love chocolate bars. They are irresistible.
Pandamilk
Apr 29th 2009 14:27
Hey tomo ^_^ good job on the sentences! There are quite a few foods and drinks which I couldn't eat/drink when I was younger, but now I love. I'll just a quick couple of them~
First one is cow's tongue. I couldn't even look at it, but now I eat it whenever I can. Second is morcilla, which is the Spanish name for black pudding. XP
誰かさん
Apr 29th 2009 14:35
Certain wines and such are dry, it just means they have a very low sugar content. But it does feel like your mouth is dry when you drink them.
Paludis
Apr 29th 2009 17:08
Nice work!
Hmmm, I used to be a very fussy eater when I was young so there's a lot of food that I eat now that I never used to eat. Recently I've started to enjoy pasta which I always used to hate. Also, I've started to dislike fast food and greasy food in general, I used to love it but I feel sick when I eat it nowadays. I think this is definitely a good thing.
Elliott (エリオット)
Apr 29th 2009 18:08
I used to be a picky eater when I was a kid, but now I find can eat most food.
s
Apr 29th 2009 19:14
The one I thought of immediately was eggplants--my mom loves them so she always cooked with them a lot, and I would always complain and tell her to stop putting eggplants in everything, haha. But now that I'm older and cook for myself I love them and tend to put them in everything I make...so someday, my daughter will probably be complaining to me about the same thing :)
tomo
Apr 29th 2009 19:48
Pandamilkさんへ、
Thank you for your comments. When I go to the 焼肉restaurant, I eat 牛タン. They are chewy but go well with lemon squeeze. I haven't known morcilla. I found out what it is. I want to try it if I have a chance.
tomo
Apr 29th 2009 19:52
誰かさんへ、
Thank you for telling me what the dry drinks are.
tomo
Apr 29th 2009 20:01
Paludisさんへ、
Thank you for your comments. You were fussy eater... To tell the truth I was too when I was young. I used to love chips but now I don't feel like eating. When I cook, I boil instead of frying.
tomo
Apr 29th 2009 20:08
エリオットさんへ、
Thank you for your comments and giving me a word picky eater which I didn't know.
When you are older,taste change. Don't you think?　年をとると、味覚が変わる。　そう思いませんか？　と言いたかった。
tomo
Apr 30th 2009 07:24
saritzaさんへ
Thank you for your comments. I was wondering when we could eat the food which we dislike. I think there is something trigger to be able to eat.
dorkwacape
Apr 30th 2009 08:16
もとの文は文法的に正しいと思うけど、直した文のほうが正しい気がします。なぜかというと、言葉を使ったのは必ず、tryするのは正しい文を作るんです。だから、tryをmakeの前の方が自然だと思います。
Desiree
Thank you for your correction!
May 01st 2009 00:10
  • Make sentences with 3 words

  • Making sentences with 3 words

 
  • I tried to use them and made sentences.

  • I tried to use them to make sentences.

 
  • Here is my writing　below.

  • Here is my writing are my sentences below. (this fits better, I think but it's subjective.)

 
  • I always ordered a hamburger without pickles at McDonald's but somehow I love pickles now.

  • I always ordered a hamburger without pickles at McDonald's but somehow, I love pickles now.

 
  • After growing up, I can drink　it.

  • After growing up Now that I am gown up, I can drink it.

 
  • Is there any food or drink which you couldn't eat before but now you love to eat?

  • Is there any food or drink which you couldn't eat before, but now you love to eat?

 
  • Thank you for your reading.

  • Thank you for your reading.

 
This was a neat idea and I enjoyed reading both the post and all the comments. I am trying to think if there's anything I didn't like to eat as a kid. I don't think so. I was a strange kid. I remember one of my favorite foods... summers at the beach I'd get squid ink blackened raviolis. I love to eat and cook. Luckily I have a good metabolism.
tomo
May 01st 2009 09:19
dorkwacapeさんへ
コメントアドバイスありがとうございました。make、let,get、 have、の使い方が難しいです。
でも少し分かってきました。きっとまた間違うと思いますが、その時はまた教えて下さい。

Desireeさんへ、
I'm glad to hear from you. Thank you for your corrections and comments. I'm not so keen on squid but I've had squid ink spaghetti once. It made all my teeth black><
It was good though.
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