2012 年 06 月 05 日：今天 (温故而知新)

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Mandarin

Jun 06th 2012 12:54

今天我没有很多工作。我改写了一张摘要。我开车到健身中心了。我也写了我的自传500英子。现在我的自传有240,000 英子。可是没有很多工作。今天的天气很好不冷不热。今晚我做晚饭。我太太说了，“很好吃。”

照片：1960s 用中文什么说？1960s我的他妈我叫“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。

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今天我没有太多工作要完成，仅仅校对了一篇摘要。我开车去过健身中心，另外我还续写了500单词的自传，现在我自传已经有240，000个单词了。但是还是工作不多。今天天气很好，不冷不热，晚上我负责做饭，我太太说：“真好吃！”

照片：1960s用中文怎么说？二十世纪六十年代我的他妈我叫“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。

I had a slow day and did a variety of things. I worked a little on my autobiography and went to work out. I had a little "real work" (paying work) too. Then I came home and made supper. My wife liked it! She was hungry when she got home.

Tim

Jun 06th 2012 13:00

我改写了一张摘要。
我改写了一张篇摘要。

我也写了我的自传500英子。
我也写了我的自传500英子字。

现在我的自传有240,000 英子。
现在我的自传有240,000 英子字。

照片：1960s 用中文什么说？
照片：1960s 用中文什么说？

一九六零年

1960s我的他妈我叫“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。
1960s我的他妈我叫姑妈？“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。

Jun 06th 2012 13:15 袅袅

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照片：1960s 用中文什么说？

一九六零年

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十九世纪六十年代

Jun 06th 2012 16:03 Agnes

是“二十世纪六十年代”！十九世纪六十年代是1860S

Jun 06th 2012 19:20 袅袅

对哦，我错了，的确是二十世纪六十年代。

reborn

Jun 06th 2012 13:43

第一人称“我“用的太多了。

53rdturtle

Jun 06th 2012 13:44

照片：1960s 用中文什么说？
照片：1960s 用中文怎么说？

二十世纪六十年代 or 六十年代

小雨

Jun 06th 2012 15:26

今天我没有很多工作。
今天我没有很多工作要完成。或者是：今天我的工作不是很多。

The problem isn't big, but it seems more fluently like that.
Just like you:
red = correction, blue = suggestion
I am sorry that I copy from you, 哈哈。。。

我也写了我的自传500英子。
我也写了我的一篇自传，大约500字。

Autobiography is yours, it repeates if you adds "我的".

今天的天气很好不冷不热。
今天的天气很好，不冷不热。

1960s我的他妈我叫“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。
1960s我的阿姨？？我叫她“Aunt Martha” 在阿肯色州 Yellville 城跟她的儿子。

I can't understand the relationship betweent you and she? Can you explain it? Sedgehead.

Jun 06th 2012 20:49 Sedgehead

Good point on 我的自传。 I've used that phrase many times an no one else mentiond the redundancy. Thanks! May Aunt Martha is, in English, simply my aunt. But in Chinese she would be called the equivalent of my father's elder brother's wife. Of course, I'd never use that clumsy phrase "father's elder brother's wife." Chinese should have one or two characters to say the same thing.

Jun 06th 2012 20:50 Sedgehead

PS: between you and her.

Jun 07th 2012 09:47 小雨

You can call your aunt "伯母" or "大妈" or "婶婶" in Chinese. I am sorry that I can't understand the meaning of "PS:....".

Jun 07th 2012 14:45 Sedgehead

P.S. is an abbreviation "post script" which literally means "after writing." A post script is a note added, usually at the end of a letter, used to add something you forgot in the main letter. "After" (post) you wrote your letter, you remembered to write (using script writing style) to the end of the note or letter.

Jun 07th 2012 23:27 小雨

Aha, so I see. But what I wanted to ask was the content of the PS: "between you and her", did you mean between me and her?

Jun 08th 2012 05:53 Sedgehead

You said: "I can't understand the relationship betweent you and she? Can you explain it? Sedgehead."

I was correcting you by saying, you should have said, "I can't understand the relationship betweent you and her? Can you explain it? Sedgehead."

So my PS was just a VERY quick correction for your use of English.