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Dec 19, 2011 22:56
I finished taking test at 17th.
I taked toeic test at 15th, and test to participate in a english course.
I was interviewed in English,but I couldn't answer a question.

For the time being I finally accomplished the task in the month.



joey
Thank you for your correction!
Dec 27, 2011 13:45
  • I taked toeic test at 15th, and test to participate in a english course.

  • I taked toeic test at 15th, and test to participatedd in an english course.i dont really get your mean you said test to but in my opinion you‘d better cancel it.

 
  • For the time being I finally accomplished the task in the month.

  • For the time being I finally accomplished the task in the month.i don’t really get it that you said “in the month” maybeyou want to say at the end of the month. what‘s more as far as i am concerned， you delete“finally” is much better.

 

come on all the same.

joey
Dec 27, 2011 13:52

i believe in you practice makes perfect！

AnkleBiter
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 18, 2012 14:40
  • I finished taking test at 17th.

  • I finished taking a test at on the 17th.

 
  • I taked toeic test at 15th, and test to participate in a english course.

  • I taked toeic test at 15th, and test to participate in a english course.I took the TOEIC test on the 15th, and the test to participate in a English course.

 
  • For the time being I finally accomplished the task in the month.

  • For the time being I finally accomplished the task in the month.For the time being, I finally accomplished (I'm not sure what you want to say)

 

Just a few problems with articles. Articles are "a" "an" and "the". Overall, very good!

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