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Oct 30th 2011 00:23

I wasn't go outside because today is holiday.
So I did surfing the Internet and look around Internet shopping mall.
It took so many times and I want to buy too many clothes.
I'm still consideration that click the payment button.
I have to sleep soon but I got up late today. so I can't sleep yet.
It's really big trouble...

k.rma

Thank you for your correction!

Oct 30th 2011 00:32

I wasn't go outside because today is holiday.
I didn't go outside because today is/was a holiday.

So I did surfing the Internet and look around Internet shopping mall.
So I did some internet surfing and (looked around)/browsed a bunch of online shops.

It took so many times and I want to buy too many clothes.
[I spent a lot of time and I wanted to buy too many clothes.] OR [I spent a lot of time online; there were too many clothes I wanted to buy.]