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Jan 13, 2012 08:01
Around 30 age as me.
Most of my classmates,who are the same age when I was in high school, are  already married him/her.
I'm not married yet.
I wish I get married before I'm 35.
I have to master English before that.
If possible,Chainese and Russian too.
However I wonder if both langueges are difficult as English.
I can do it!We can change lol
Axxom
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 13, 2012 08:08
  • Around 30 age as me.

  • I am about 30 years old.

 
  • Most of my classmates,who are the same age when I was in high school, are  already married him/her.

  • Most of my classmates, who are the same age as me, are already married.

 
  • I wish I get married before I'm 35.

  • I hope I get married before I'm 35.

 
  • If possible,Chainese and Russian too.

  • If possible, Chinese and Russian too.

 
  • However I wonder if both langueges are difficult as English.

  • However I wonder if both langueges are as difficult as English.

 
  • I can do it!We can change lol

  • I can do it! We can change lol

 

^_^

Jan 13, 2012 08:31 u_amima
Thank you for your kindness!
JacobB
Thank you for your correction!
Jan 13, 2012 08:13
  • The marriage

  • The mMarriage (In English, the first little of every word in the title are always capitalized except for words like a, an, the, etc. if they are not the first word.)

 
  • Around 30 age as me.

  • I'm Aaround the age of 30 age as me.

 
  • Most of my classmates,who are the same age when I was in high school, are  already married him/her.

  • Most of my classmates,who are the same age as me when I was in high school, are already married to him/her. (It is not necessary to say that they were the same age as you when you were in high school because the reader would already assume that you would be around the same age.)

 
  • I wish I get married before I'm 35.

  • I wish I to get married before I'm 35.

 
  • If possible,Chainese and Russian too.

  • If possible, Chainese Chinese and Russian too.

 
  • However I wonder if both langueges are difficult as English.

  • However, I wonder if both of the langueges languages are as difficult as English. (Russian and Chinese are nothing like English, so you may actually find both of these languages to be easier then English.)

 
  • I can do it!We can change lol

  • I can do it! We can change! lol (It would be best if you stuck with using proper English while you are still learning it.)

 

Jan 13, 2012 08:31 u_amima
Thank you very much for all your kindness.

Jan 14, 2012 08:42 Zoe

  • However, I wonder if both of the langueges languages are as difficult as English. (Russian and Chinese are nothing like English, so you may actually find both of these languages to be easier then English.)

I doubt that :) I've never met anyone who would think Russian is easier than English :)
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