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Nov 17, 2013 17:54 made 6 corrections for Too excited to sleep!
Nov 2, 2013 18:41 Shizuhi made 4 corrections for Two days ago, I sprained my...
My injury was much worse, I dislocated my elbow joint before. I went to the Chinese doctor and he pushed my joints back into place with h...
Oct 4, 2013 04:15 XceednLimits made 5 corrections for Two days ago, I sprained my...
Great job on this post! I hope your ankle feels better soon.
Oct 3, 2013 23:40 agi commented on Two days ago, I sprained my...
大変だよね。。お大事に。僕なら中学時代の遊び時、手首を捻挫した。気にしなくて、又遊んでいて、同じ手首再び捻挫した。痛みが酷かった。その捻挫は靭帯損傷かどうか分からないが、揉み療治で治したよ。
Jun 28, 2013 15:45 Taras made 12 corrections for Спасибо за E-mail.....
Jun 28, 2013 12:21 ezhikpuh made 4 corrections for Спасибо за E-mail.....
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Jun 28, 2013 09:35 Кошка made 3 corrections for Спасибо за E-mail.....
Jun 9, 2012 17:12 Shizuhi made 3 corrections for Frankenstein
Yes indeed, the creature had a sad life...
Jun 8, 2012 17:19 Jo made 9 corrections for Chemical Secret
Nice try:)
May 30, 2012 21:01 Victoria commented on Здравствуй!
よろしくお願いします。ロシア語はほんとに難しいす。 :)
May 30, 2012 16:10 Ryoko made 9 corrections for Упражненин
3 Почему вам нравится этот город? 4 Вам нравится этот фотоаппарат? Почему? 5 а)Как вам этот фильм? б)Как ты оцениваешь этот фильм? ...
May 30, 2012 16:02 Erien commented on Здравствуй!
Здравствуйте! И добро пожаловать.
May 18, 2012 00:10 chosun commented on The Secret Garden
wow good for your writes i wonder what is yout dream? in my case my dream is diplomat
May 17, 2012 17:59 GabeGR made 6 corrections for The Secret Garden
Nice!
Apr 22, 2012 13:19 Jason commented on No title
Welcome back :D
Mar 16, 2012 13:30 MrToan commented on Gratitude for my friends
Since all your sentences are mostly correct, I thought you might like to see how a native speaker would write this. "Thanks to al...
Mar 14, 2012 07:44 MrToan made 8 corrections for Let us explain how great ou...
First off, your question. "By the time he was ten years old, he had developed a strong taste for chemistry and made himself a labora...
Feb 21, 2012 20:36 chosun commented on Let us explain how great ou...
i think made a laboratory by himself
Feb 10, 2012 21:49 Shizuhi made 8 corrections for I'd like to....
I've corrected it so that it sounds more natural~! We use the word "advertisement" instead of CM. I'm not sure whet...
Feb 3, 2012 12:34 TortovRoddle made 1 corrections for Eating dinner with your fam...
'*they may be keen on TV while eating, from a different view point, you will see they like the program much.' This sentence is...
Feb 2, 2012 23:52 MrToan made 5 corrections for Practice for the exam.
Very good! I've been exceedingly busy these last few months, and I haven't had much time for anything outside of work. But I w...
Feb 2, 2012 23:48 MrToan made 5 corrections for I would participate in....
Great job on your first sentence, I added "like to" because it matches the rest of your entry better. If you just say "I w...
Jan 30, 2012 14:33 Yuzu_Renjyai made 6 corrections for I think an electronic dicti...
I like paper dictionaries for beginners. When it takes time and effort to look up a word, you can remember it better. There are no reward...
Jan 28, 2012 06:39 Daniel made 5 corrections for Eating dinner with family....
Hahaha, I think the logic is rather strange as well. But, I do think it is a good idea for families to have meals together, and use the t...
Jan 27, 2012 13:51 Daniel made 5 corrections for Question
Regarding the sentence "Now, more bad news from the automobile industry." In this case, the word "more" is not use...
Jan 27, 2012 13:45 Daniel made 5 corrections for Lying is not always.....
If you have good intentions when you are lying, then the lies are called "white lies". For example, if I am planning a surprise...
Jan 25, 2012 21:43 Shizuhi made 3 corrections for If people all over the worl...
失礼かもしれませんですが、私の添削は「bubble-cc」のとまったく異なる。 「were to」を置いてままの方が正しいと思っています。 それと、英語では「past year papers」の方が自然です。 作文の方は大丈夫と思います。^_^
Jan 24, 2012 21:43 bubble-cc made 3 corrections for If people all over the worl...
but i don't konw your expression clearly. The logic between the same language and the various languages. :)
Jan 24, 2012 21:31 made 1 corrections for Center Test (センター試験)
Good luck!
Jan 21, 2012 21:20 chosun commented on Question
i think you are like economy well in my case economy is very difficult
Jan 17, 2012 03:38 id commented on Center Test (センター試験)
Your efforts will yield best results ! What is the name of exams in February 24 & 25 . センター 試験 第2?
Dec 31, 2011 13:54 id made 4 corrections for Funny Expression of Christmas
セミシマス の混合言葉 勉強になりました。
Dec 24, 2011 08:42 Shizuhi made 2 corrections for For Christmas day...
I'm Christian so I will be going for Mass at Midnight tonight! Then tomorrow afternoon, we'll be heading to our parents' frie...
Dec 19, 2011 11:17 Shizuhi made 1 corrections for Could you help me with my h...
「so to an almost unsociable extent is his mind」 ここの「so」は「therefore」の意味です。「だから」の意味です。 文を rephrase しましょう。 It is because the Englishman...
Dec 19, 2011 11:00 Shizuhi made 1 corrections for Preparation for the end-of-...
全ての「Sample Answer」は自然です。
Dec 19, 2011 10:54 Shizuhi made 3 corrections for Preparation for the end-of-...
Model Answer 1 は一番良いんです。他の質問は文法で間違っていないですけど、答えは全然その質問に答えていません。
Nov 15, 2011 05:34 MrToan made 3 corrections for Translation practice
Sample answer 1 is terrible, the English is put together very poorly. Dont use that as an example for your work. Hope my few correcti...
Nov 10, 2011 14:04 TortovRoddle made 7 corrections for Translation practice
I thought the sample answers were provided by an instructor or book? Or do you write each of these sentences? I don't have time t...
Nov 7, 2011 10:22 TortovRoddle made 2 corrections for Writing section of today...
Saying 'obviously' makes sense, but when making a point, it should be reserved for spoken conversation or with people you know. S...
Nov 6, 2011 02:28 TortovRoddle made 3 corrections for practice to express my opin...
"Very plan" is an awkward thing to say in English. 'Very' can mean 'exact', 'ideal', or 'perfect...
Nov 1, 2011 21:45 marcwo commented on Could I ask some questions?
For "will double" and "will be doubled", both are correct in my opinion. It is similar to "The price increased b...
Oct 27, 2011 08:22 TortovRoddle made 1 corrections for test review (テスト直し)
The only change I would make is removing that one comma. Everything else seems very natural. A note for speaking naturally: In conver...
Oct 23, 2011 16:10 みの commented on I have one question at the ...
Thank you everyone!! I undestood :)
Oct 23, 2011 11:00 TortovRoddle commented on I have one question at the ...
'Conversation' can mean either one instance of people talking together, or the entire act of people talking together. Two (or ...
Oct 23, 2011 10:56 Sushi Smile made 1 corrections for I have one question at the ...
I'm not sure. It's a mystery. It could be a misprint because earlier it says "conversations" http://pekepenguin.com/
Oct 23, 2011 04:29 TortovRoddle made 6 corrections for Would you recommend me a book?
Parenthesis are fine when making notes about what you've said, but in short sentences, you can just put a comma before it, usually. C...
Oct 22, 2011 23:03 drfranktm made 6 corrections for Would you recommend me a book?
My first language isn't English - it's French -, so I didn't read much in English as a kid. Hopefully, others will know more ...
Oct 22, 2011 11:30 TortovRoddle made 6 corrections for review a test (テスト直し)
'so long hours' 'So long' is okay by itself, but if you include a noun, like 'hours', you should say 'such...
Oct 22, 2011 00:36 TortovRoddle made 7 corrections for About "かたつむり"(chi...
"know where parts of them are" This is okay, but once you include examples, like 'eyes' and 'head', you shou...