If people all over the world.....

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Jan 24, 2012 21:27
If people around the world were to use the same language, would it be easier to communicate with foreigners? Actually, it could be more difficult. Suppose you talk to those who can't fluently speak your mother tongue. You talk in simpler words, don't you? So, thanks to the diversity of languages, we can communicate in the most easily understandable way. (60 words)

This is a part of a past exams collection. (過去問の一部です)
I have to express my opinion within 50~60 words.
Tell me my grammatical mistakes, whether or not it is logical, and show me, if any, better expressions.
(文法・論理・より良い言い方など添削お願いします。