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Oct 16, 2011 09:55 friends. advice.
Yestraday,i become a new member in lang-8.And i add some new friends in this web.Among them,Haetnim,natadekoko love and Robertx add me,this is a big encouragement for me to deliver this diary.

Specially,mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard,do not add me very urgent.But he give me a useful advice.That is i can write down my self-introduction or an short diary that everyone can know me more.

The following is which Mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard said to me:很高兴收到你的来信。请问，你可不可以先写一个简短的自我介绍或发表一两个日记？这样，正式交一个网友更方便！谢谢！


So,at this time.I am really really thank all of you.and wish us can have a good net-communication.

Tom
Oct 16, 2011 10:54
  • Thank you all of you.

  • Thank you all of you.

 
  • Yestraday,i become a new member in lang-8.

  • Yesterday, I became a new member in of lang-8.

 
  • And i add some new friends in this web.

  • And I added some new friends in on this site web.

 
  • Among them,Haetnim,natadekoko love and Robertx add me,this is a big encouragement for me to deliver this diary.

  • Among them, Haetnim, natadekoko love, and Robertx added me, so this is a big encouragement for me to deliver this diary.

 
  • Specially,mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard,do not add me very urgent.

  • Specially, mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard, do not add me very urgently. It has to be :urgently," and adverb, because it modifies "add," a verb.

 
  • But he give me a useful advice.

  • But he gave me a useful advice.

 
  • That is i can write down my self-introduction or an short diary that everyone can know me more.

  • That is, I can write down my self-introduction, or an short diary, so that everyone can know me more.

 
  • The following is which Mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard said to me:很高兴收到你的来信。

  • The following is which what Mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard told said to me:很高兴收到你的来信。

 
  • So,at this time.

  • So, at this time I really want to thank all of you.

 
  • I am really really thank all of you.

  • I am really really thank all of you.

 
  • and wish us can have a good net-communication.

  • and wish us I hope we can have a good net-communication.

 

Good start! Keep writing and try to follow the suggestions of your lang-8 friends.

Oct 16, 2011 17:08 lilei88007

  • Specially, mr.贤瀚 ทินกร Burkhard, do not add me very urgently. It has to be :urgently," and adverb, because it modifies "add," a verb.

Thank you ,TOM.This is a great help to me.I should take a careful and prudent attitude to my diary.
lilei88007
Oct 16, 2011 17:17

Really feel grateful to you.

Haetnim
Oct 16, 2011 22:12

Hi, I'm happy to know you ^_^ I am studying Chinese and English, so you can help my learning languages. Anf if you're interestes in Korean, I can give you some help, too. Let's make good relationship^.^

Oct 16, 2011 23:44 lilei88007
ok. glad to meet u here.
Mackie1402
Oct 17, 2011 00:34
  • And i add some new friends in this web.

  • And I added some new friends on this website.

 

Oct 17, 2011 23:57 lilei88007
Thanks so much.
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