A Beauty Parlor

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Dec 16, 2011 13:18
I went to a beauty parlor to have my hair permed on Sunday.
There were about fifteen beauticians and customers.
They were speaking cheerful each other but I was reading a weekly.
A beautician sometimes told me about a story of the magazine.
I thought he was similar to someone, but I couldn't remember anyone.
I like this beauty parlor that I found on the website recently because the charge is very cheep.
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Dec 16, 2011 14:33
  • I went to a beauty parlor to have my hair permed on Sunday.

  • I went to a beauty parlor to get a perm on Sunday.

 
  • They were speaking cheerful each other but I was reading a weekly.

  • They were speaking cheerfully to each other but I was reading a weekly.

 
  • A beautician sometimes told me about a story of the magazine.

  • A beautician sometimes told me about the stories of the magazine.

 
  • I thought he was similar to someone, but I couldn't remember anyone.

  • He reminded me of someone, but I couldn't think of who.

 

Good job.

Dec 16, 2011 15:02 naohaha
Thank you for your correction.
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