BASEBALL

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Nov 9, 2011 00:19

Recently it has been getting cold.

I played baseball with my fridnds.

I was pitcher and was hit a home run (；´∀｀)

It was discovered that I was petty baseball player. OMG!!

narie

Thank you for your correction!

Nov 9, 2011 05:49

I played baseball with my fridnds.
I played baseball with my friends.

It was discovered that I was petty baseball player.
It was discovered turned out that I was petty baseball player.

Nov 9, 2011 20:28 Atti

Thank you for correcting on my writing^^

Shweta

Thank you for your correction!

Nov 9, 2011 10:48

I was pitcher and was hit a home run (；´∀｀)
I was pitcher and the batter I pitched to hit a home run (；´∀｀)

Aw! I'm sorry! But, the batter must have been really good! Don't feel bad [:

Nov 9, 2011 20:39 Atti

Thanks for correcting ^^!

Haha, I'm really a bad pitcher XD lol

Nov 10, 2011 00:38 Shweta

XD At least you CAN pitch, though. Usually when I pitch, I hit someone with the ball. Or it goes completely off course. I can't seem to aim >.<

^^ I hope you had fun either way, though.