I met my friend!

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Oct 9, 2011 00:26
Today is Saturday! It's weekend ^^
I met my friend today.
It was sunny. So It was good for walk.
We went shopping to down town and went to have lunch.
And then we talked about our daily life having some coffee at a cafe
We had many words to each other.
Because we could not have a meeting for a long time!
I had a great time with my friend.
Today was passed quickly.
seraglyph
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 9, 2011 00:30
  • It's weekend ^^

  • It's the weekend ^^

 
  • So It was good for walk.

  • So it was a good day for walk.

 
  • We went shopping to down town and went to have lunch.

  • We went shopping to downtown and [went to have lunch/had lunch].

 
  • And then we talked about our daily life having some coffee at a cafe

  • And then we talked about our daily life while having some coffee at a cafe

 
  • We had many words to each other.

  • We [had many words with/exchanged many words with] each other.

 
  • Because we could not have a meeting for a long time!

  • It was because we wouldn't be able to meet again for a long time!

 
  • Today was passed quickly.

  • Today [passed/went by] quickly.

 

Oct 9, 2011 10:27 Gretel
Thank you for correcting my journal! Have a great day^^

Oct 9, 2011 18:12 seraglyph
どういたしまして。
David
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 9, 2011 03:36
  • It was sunny.

  • It was a sunny day.

 
  • So It was good for walk.

  • So It was good for walk./// So it was good for a walk.

 
  • We went shopping to down town and went to have lunch.

  • We went shopping to down town and went to have lunch./// We went shopping in downtown and them we went to have lunch.

 

Good!. :)

Oct 9, 2011 10:26 Gretel
Thank you~! ^^ Your correcting is helping know what my mistakes are! :)
Great ・Teacher ・ブレンドン
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 9, 2011 03:41
  • We went shopping to down town and went to have lunch.

  • We went shopping downtown and had lunch.

 
  • And then we talked about our daily life having some coffee at a cafe

  • Then, we talked about our daily life having some coffee at a cafe

 
  • We had many words to each other.

  • We had many words with each other because we hadn't met in a long time!

 
  • Because we could not have a meeting for a long time!

  • Because we could not have a meeting for a long time!

 
  • I had a great time with my friend.

  • I had a great time with my friend him/her.

 

That's great. I also spend time with some friends tonight. I hope to write about it tomorrow, when I wake up ^^

Oct 9, 2011 10:23 Gretel
Thank you~! ^^ I hope to read your journal about meeting your friends!
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