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Jun 15th 2010 22:41

I have to write a speech.
And I have no time...
Please help me.

I have to write negative opinion about immigration, so please don't mind. ( I'm sorry I don't know what I should say...)

I have negative opinion against significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies.

One reason is public order.
Society, composed chiefly of native Japanese, is stable, because Japanese are uneasiness about foreigner, so if there are many immigrants in Japan, we cannot live in safety.
In addition, we can maintain Japanese defense capability by using advanced military equipment.
In other words, we can defend our country without much population.

Second reason is Japanese traditional culture.
We, Japanese have a lot of characteristics culture of food, building and belief.
Especially belief, Japanese behavior is in character.
It is sometimes not a direct action, but it means compassion.
Please imagine, there are a lot of immigrant in Japan, may be we forget our way of expression.
I think we must keep these traditions.

Finally, I'd like to tell you that we have a duty of keeping our public order and important tradition.
I think especially Japanese traditional culture is very precious.
So I deny of significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies strongly.

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Jun 16th 2010 00:24

I have to write negative opinion about immigration, so please don't mind.
I have to write negative opinion about immigration, so please don't mind.So please don't take offence sounds a bit more natural

I have negative opinion against significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies.
I have negative opinion against significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies.I am against a relaxation/I strongly disagree with a relaxation of Japanese immigration policies.

One reason is public order.
One reason is public order.One reason has to do with public order.

Society, composed chiefly of native Japanese, is stable, because Japanese are uneasiness about foreigner, so if there are many immigrants in Japan, we cannot live in safety.
Society, composed chiefly of native Japanese, is stable, because Japanese are uneasiness about foreigner, so if there are many immigrants in Japan, we cannot live in safety.Your argument doesn't really make sense

In addition, we can maintain Japanese defense capability by using advanced military equipment.
In addition, we can would be able to maintain Japanese defense capability by using advanced military equipment.What does this have to do with immigrants?

In other words, we can defend our country without much population.
In other words, we can defend our country without much population without the need for a large population.

Second reason is Japanese traditional culture.
The second reason is has got to do with Japanese traditional culture.

We, Japanese have a lot of characteristics culture of food, building and belief.
We, Japanese have a lot of (specific national?) characteristics that affect our culture in areas such as food, architecture and beliefs.

Especially belief, Japanese behavior is in character.
Especially belief, Japanese behavior is in character.Doesn't make sense.

It is sometimes not a direct action, but it means compassion.
It is sometimes not a direct action, but it means compassion.I'm sorry, but I don't understand this either.

Please imagine, there are a lot of immigrant in Japan, may be we forget our way of expression.
Please imagine, there are a lots of immigrants in Japan, may be we could forget our way of expression.

Finally, I'd like to tell you that we have a duty of keeping our public order and important tradition.
Finally, I'd like to tell you that we have a duty of keeping our public order and important traditions.

So I deny of significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies strongly.
So I'm strongly against significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies strongly.

Thank you for your correction!

Jun 16th 2010 15:23

I have to write negative opinion about immigration, so please don't mind.
I have to write a negative opinion about immigration, so please don't be offended.

I have negative opinion against significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies.
I would like to express my concerns about significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies.

One reason is public order.
One reason concerns public order.

Society, composed chiefly of native Japanese, is stable, because Japanese are uneasiness about foreigner, so if there are many immigrants in Japan, we cannot live in safety.
Our society, composed chiefly of native Japanese people, has a reputation for being a safe place to live. My concern is that if large numbers of immigrants make Japan their home, our safety will be seriously compromised.

In addition, we can maintain Japanese defense capability by using advanced military equipment.
Another point is that the extra population that immigrants would create would not be necessary from the standpoint of military defense since Japan is already capable of defense using advanced military equipment.

Second reason is Japanese traditional culture.
Another reason concerns Japanese traditional culture.

We, Japanese have a lot of characteristics culture of food, building and belief.
Our country is rich in culture found nowhere else in the world. I believe if large numbers of immigrants are allowed to settle here, our unique culture would be lost forever.

So I deny of significantly relaxing Japanese immigration policies strongly.
So I would definitely not support the significant relaxing Japanese immigration policies.

Hello,

The things I have written are really not corrections but merely suggestions.
Good luck with your speech!