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Mar 09th 2010 10:58
Please carect it.

What do you think the mean of the word “mature”?
I looked up that ward in my dictionary, and its means are growing up, like an adult or discreet. I think it means to be mature person is to be a discreet person. A discreet person can look around him, and think of other people who are near by him. Moreover, I think such a person would behave thoughtfully on the public place, he gives his seat to an elderly lady or a woman who is taking her children in the train, and picks up and dumps garbage rather than through away them on the street, and he never make noise on the public place. Not everyone can do them. I think such a mature person can understand the world, or distinguish good things from bad one, and he will succeed. I don’t know what the world is yet, but I’ll go out into there soon. So now is very important span for me, because I can learn a lot of things. I have to live carefully with my precious high school life.

I have many massage I have not respond.
Now i have tests in my school, so when it over, I respond you.
I'm so sorry!!
Ckasper
Thank you for your correction!
Mar 09th 2010 14:37
  • Pease help me!!

  • Please help me!!

 
  • Please carect it.

  • Please correct this.

 
  • What do you think the mean of the word “mature”?

  • What do you think is the meaning of the word “mature”?

 
  • I looked up that ward in my dictionary, and its means are growing up, like an adult or discreet.

  • I looked up that word in my dictionary, and its means are growing up, like an adult or to be discreet.

 
  • Moreover, I think such a person would behave thoughtfully on the public place, he gives his seat to an elderly lady or a woman who is taking her children in the train, and picks up and dumps garbage rather than through away them on the street, and he never make noise on the public place.

  • Moreover, I think such a person would behave thoughtfully on the public place, he gives his seat to an elderly lady or a woman who is taking her children in the train, and picks up and dumps garbage rather than through away them on the street, and he never make noise in a public place.

 
  • Not everyone can do them.

  • Not everyone can do that.

 
  • I don’t know what the world is yet, but I’ll go out into there soon.

  • I don’t know what the world is yet, but I’ll go out into it soon.

 
  • I have many massage I have not respond.

  • I have many messages I have not respond to.

 
  • Now i have tests in my school, so when it over, I respond you.

  • Now i have tests in my school, so when it over, I respond to you.

 
It sounds like you're a rather mature person yourself! I would have to agree with you. I believe "mature" means having the ability to think about other people's concerns and not just yourself.

Your English is good! Just watch your spelling on a few words. Keep up the good work and enjoy high school while you can!
Ayaka
Mar 09th 2010 18:10
Ckasper さん　Thank you very much. You saved me!!
I'm happy, because you agree with me^^
I have to study English more.
EricNolgen
Mar 10th 2010 08:06
  • I looked up that ward in my dictionary, and its means are growing up, like an adult or discreet.

  • I looked up that word in my dictionary, and its meanings are growing up, like an adult, or to be discreet.

 
  • I think it means to be mature person is to be a discreet person.

  • I think it means to be a mature person and also a discreet person. <-Is this what you meant?

 
  • A discreet person can look around him, and think of other people who are near by him.

  • A discreet person can look around and think of the nearby/surrounding people. <-I think I changed the meaning of the sentence, but I'm not sure...

 
  • Moreover, I think such a person would behave thoughtfully on the public place, he gives his seat to an elderly lady or a woman who is taking her children in the train, and picks up and dumps garbage rather than through away them on the street, and he never make noise on the public place.

  • Moreover, I think such a person would behave thoughtfully on the public place, giving a seat to an elderly lady or a woman who is taking her children in the train, or a person who picks up and dumps garbage rather than throwing it away on the street, or never making noise on a public place.

 
  • I think such a mature person can understand the world, or distinguish good things from bad one, and he will succeed.

  • I think such a mature person can understand the world, or distinguish good things from bad ones, and he will succeed.

 
  • So now is very important span for me, because I can learn a lot of things.

  • So now is a very important time for me, because I can learn a lot of things.

 
  • Now i have tests in my school, so when it over, I respond you.

  • Now I have tests in my school, so when that's over, I will respond to you.

 
Tokiwa！　久しぶりなぁ～
最近どう？試験は難しい？
I hope you're going well with your tests. You are very smart and I don't need to say this but... good luck!

Correction notes: If you noticed, I corrected all sentences where you used "him" or "he" referring to a genderless person. Usually, it's best to avoid using a gender when talking about any person. I have read something about this somewhere but if someone has a different opinion, please tell me ^^.
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