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For these reasons, I thnk education that aims at development of individual tarent rather than learning by rote is needed. I like time to spear, because I can have free time for talking with my family or doing my hobbies. But for the reason of it, many students became going to a cram school. If you sleep during your class in your school, and go to a cram school, your studying is no meanng. At first, you should enough in your school, after that if you want to study more, you can go to a cram school. By the way, I think Japanese school is putting a great deal of effort into a cultural exchange between other countries. In my high school, there are systems for relation to other countries. My class which called international comunication carse is one of systems, that we can lean other country's traditional way of life as well as English, and we can see many people from other countries. My high school have many chance to go othere countries. May be it is not only my high school but also other school. I think it is very good things for our future.
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For these reasons, I thnk education that aims at development of individual talent rather than learning by rote is needed.
I like time tospare, because I can have free time for talking with my family or doing my hobbies.
But for the reason of it, many students begin going to a cram school.
If you sleep during your class in your school,even you go to a cram school, your studying is no meanng.
At first, you should spend enough time in your school, after that if you want to study more, you can go to a cram school.
By the way, I think Japanese school is putting a great deal of effort into a cultural exchange with other countries.
My class which called international comunication course is one of systems, in whicht we can lean other country's traditional way of life as well as English, and we can see many people from other countries.
My high school give us many chances to go other countries.
Maybe it is not only my high school but also other school.
I'll write this continuation next time.
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Could you please correct my entry/diary? <--The other one is not incorrect, but this one is better I think ^^.
For these reasons, I think the education that aims at the development of individual talent rather than learning by rote is needed the most.
I like to have free time, because I can talk with my family or have time for my hobbies.
But for some reason many students end up going to cram school. <--I'm not sure here..
If you sleep during class and then go to cram school, your studying has no meaning. ------ If you sleep during class in cram school, then your studying has no meaning. <--I'm not sure which one you wanted to write.
By the way, I think Japanese schools are putting a great deal of effort into cultural exchange with other countries.
In my high school, there are systems to create relations with other countries.
One of my classes called International Communication course is one of those systems, where we can learn other country's traditional way of life as well as English, and we can see many people from other countries.
My high school gives us many opportunities to go to other countries.
Maybe it's not only my high school and other schools may also offer these opportunities.
I think there are very good things for our future.